Draft:Rill Wash

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Declined by AlphaBetaGamma 2 months ago. Last edited by AlphaBetaGamma 2 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Sources are questionable (FN2, 3 are ok), Everything is at the end of the paragraph. One major concern. Is there really nothing more to write about this subject? You might want to merge this to an already existing article if there's really nothing else to write for this. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 01:18, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Comment: Please be aware of WP:OVERKILL, the citations could ideally be placed in more relevant areas, instead of all being at the end of the paragraph. Encoded Talk 💬 22:07, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Rill wash is runoff comprised of sediment which flows through rills. Rill wash is created when water flows through areas with large amounts of sediment from past erosion or dried rill wash. This water then forms or flows through already-created rills, hence the name. The flow of rill wash plays a key role in the removal of material from eroded areas. When the water in the rill wash evaporates, it can leave behind a deposition of the sediment carried.^[1]^[2]^[3]^[4]

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^ "rill-wash | Encyclopedia.com". www.encyclopedia.com.
^ "USGS: Geological Survey Bulletin 1191 (How the Canyon was Carved)". www.nps.gov.
^ "Sheet erosion | Soil Deposition, Runoff & Erosion | Britannica". www.britannica.com.
^ "Rill Erosion and Gully Erosion: What's The Difference". October 16, 2023.

[1] "rill-wash | Encyclopedia.com". www.encyclopedia.com.

[2] "USGS: Geological Survey Bulletin 1191 (How the Canyon was Carved)". www.nps.gov.

[3] "Sheet erosion | Soil Deposition, Runoff & Erosion | Britannica". www.britannica.com.

[4] "Rill Erosion and Gully Erosion: What's The Difference". October 16, 2023.

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