Draft:Mohammad Barakzai

Mohammad Barakzai
Mohammad Barakzai
Number 1 Corps of Jalalabad
Personal details
Born	Kingdom of Afghanistan
Died	7 March 1989; Jalalabad Airport
Occupation	Military general
Military service
Allegiance	Afghanistan
Branch/service	Afghan Armed Forces
Rank	Major General
Commands	Number 1 Corps; 11 Division infantry
Battles/wars	Battle of Jalalabad †

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Mohammad Barakzai was an Afghan general in the Afghan army and the commander of Corps Number 1. He was killed in the Battle of Jalalabad by his own security guards.^[1]^[2]^[3]^[4]

References

^ Azimi, General Nabi (11 April 2019). The Army and Politics: Afghanistan: 1963-1993. AuthorHouse. ISBN 978-1-7283-8701-7.
^ لعلستانى (2005). جنگ قدرت: وقايع سه دهۀ اخير افغانستان [‏The Events of the Last Three Decades of Afghanistan] (in Dari).
^ Fida Yunas, S. (1998). Afghanistan: Organization of the Peoples Democratic Party of Afghanistan/Watan Party, Governments and Biographical Sketches 1982-1998, Volume 1.
^ Summary of World Broadcasts: The Far East. Part III. 1989.

[1] Azimi, General Nabi (11 April 2019). The Army and Politics: Afghanistan: 1963-1993. AuthorHouse. ISBN 978-1-7283-8701-7.

[2] لعلستانى (2005). جنگ قدرت: وقايع سه دهۀ اخير افغانستان [‏The Events of the Last Three Decades of Afghanistan] (in Dari).

[3] Fida Yunas, S. (1998). Afghanistan: Organization of the Peoples Democratic Party of Afghanistan/Watan Party, Governments and Biographical Sketches 1982-1998, Volume 1.

[4] Summary of World Broadcasts: The Far East. Part III. 1989.

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