Draft:Marial Lou
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Submission declined on 1 January 2024 by Velella (talk). The sources provided are insufficient to demonstrate notability for this place. Clearly sources are available to the author given the amount of detail provided. These should be included as references as appropriate. Declined by Velella 8 months ago. | ![]() |
Comment: It is impossible for any reviewer to know what that great jumble of references at the end is supposed to support. Please read and implement WP:REF so that each reference is in-line with the facts that it is supposed to support. Improper referencing is not a valid reason to decline a Draft, but in this case it is impossible to determine whether any of these references does indicate notability. Wading through those that I can access gives me no confidence that the article as it stands is notable. As a place and a location there is a tacit assumption that it will be notable, so why not reduce the article to two or three lines that can be supported by refs and then seek to slowly expand it over time with well referenced material Velella Velella Talk 02:59, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
Comment: The fact that you call the article an 'oral account' indicates it is original research. The correct way to publish this kind of content on the web is through a blog or free web host, not Wikipedia. Sungodtemple (talk • contribs) 15:10, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Comment: Inline citations are preferable. At the moment one would have to read all of the external links at the end in order to verify any of the statements. Greenman (talk) 09:42, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Marial Lou, established in 1994, presently remains one of the key and important towns in Warrap state, providing excellent health, educational, market of cows, and livestock services. Lou Paher are the people who inhabit it. It is bordered to the east by Romic, Kacuat in the south, Rualbet in the west and Akop in the northwest and River Nile in the north.
When the war broke out again in the Sudan between North and South in 1983, the territory of Lou Paher was under the rebels, the Sudan People's Liberation Army (SPLA) which were favored by the local people as they were considered fighting for a just cause-freedom for the African people of the South.
In 1994, SPLA ordered the civilians to cut down trees and opened it, declaring it safe for humanitarian flights landing and air dropping. There were many other Marials such as Marial Baai, where humanitarian centers were opened and to differentiate it, Lou, the name of the people of the area was added to be called as Marial Lou meaning, the land of the Lou people.
On September 15th 1994, Apostolic administrator of the Catholic Diocese of Rumbek, Ceasar Mazzolari who had sent Fr. Benjamin Madol Akot to assess the area to see its suitability to open a mission there, declared and opened it a mission-named Daniel Comboni. There was to be a primary school named Comboni primary school and dispensary for minor treatment to pupils and leprosy. Fr. Benjamin Madol Akot, now known as the founder of the mission remains a very popular figure within the local population praised for opening eyes of their children to see education (Gray et al. 2001).
In 1998, one of the severest famines stroke the SPLA liberated areas as a result of the long drought and conflict the year before (1997). Kerbino Kuanyin Bol, one of the SPLA founding members, who had signed an agreement with Khartoum government defected back to the rebels carrying out a failed capture of Wau town-the only lifeline for Bhar El Ghazal region. As a resulted 69,830 people died(Deng,1999).
A year later (1996) Veterinary sans frontiers (VSF Belgium) established a livestock training center, now known as Marial Lou Livestock Training center (MLLTC). The following year (1997), Medicine Sans Frontiers (MSF) came and opened rural hospital, now Marial Lou Hospital. However, the hospital wards were in a grass thatched roofs but were giving excellent emergency lifesaving treatment except what needed complicated surgery was it referred to Lokichogio, at the border with Kenya.
References
[edit]1. Gray, Richard. "SUDANESE CHRISTIANITY Day of Devastation, Day of Contentment: The History of the Sudanese Church across 2000 Years. By ROLAND WERNER, WILLIAM ANDERSON and ANDREW WHEELER. Nairobi: Paulines Publications Africa, 2000. Pp. 688. $15 (ISBN 9966-21-529-8)." The Journal of African History 42, no. 3 (2001): 491-544. [1] [2] [3]
- ^ ""Unfortunately only one of my students was left"". www.medicusmundi.ch.
- ^ "Our history – Comboni Missionaries South Sudan".
- ^ Love story; the Comboni missionaries in South Sudan from the beginning 1857 to 2017.
4. 'Marial Lou Livestock Training Center'. https://mlltc.wordpress.com/ 5. Revitalizing Marial Lou livestock training center institute. https://reliefweb.int/report/south-sudan/project-highlights-revitalizing-marial-lou-livestock-training-institute-and 6. 'Marial Lou Livestock Training center'. https://www.schoolandcollegelistings.com/SS/Juba/676411089157768/Marial-Lou-Livestock-Training-Centre---MLLTC 7. 'St. Daniel Comboni Mission Marial Lou'. http://www.gcatholic.org/churches/africa/100632.htm 8. 'Catholic Diocese of Rumbek'. https://docplayer.net/51684204-The-catholic-diocese-of-rumbek-south-sudan.html 9. Rioux, Erica. "Building A Global Community: Bridging and Bonding Through International Social Work." (2006). 10. Sesana, Renato Kizito, and Silvano Borruso. I Am a Nuba. No. 16. Paulines Publications Africa, 2006. 11. Bhar El Ghazal and the Famine of 1998. https://www.hrw.org/reports/1999/sudan/SUDAWEB2-01.htm. 12. The Roman Catholic Diocese of Rumbek. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Roman_Catholic_Diocese_of_Rumbek. 13. MSF Operations in Southern Sudan. https://www.doctorswithoutborders.org/latest/msf-operations-southern-sudan. 14. Following the return of stability in Marial Lou, UNMISS conducts air patrol as part of a consistent engagements to maintain peace. https://peacekeeping.un.org/en/following-return-of-relative-stability-marial-lou-unmiss-conducts-air-patrol-part-of-consistent 15. Deng, L. B. (1999). Famine in the Sudan: causes, preparedness and response: a political, social and economic analysis of the 1998 Bahr el Ghazal.