Draft:Kave Jackson

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Declined by AstrooKai 18 hours ago. Last edited by AstrooKai 18 hours ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: The draft reads like an essay or blog post, with subjective language and a lack of verifiable sources. While there are "inline citations" (numbers in square brackets), they are not formatted correctly to link to actual sources, suggesting that the content may have been copied from another source. AstrooKai (Talk) 09:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

Kave Jackson (born July 20, 2002) is a Canadian Artist. Regarded as a Drill icon, he is recognized for his multi-genre musical performances.[5][6][7] He was discovered by many American record labels throughout the years and has had a very challenging career as an artist fighting against the machine. Kave Found some mainstream acts with his drillpop-driven single, Just Wanna Drill (2022), which debuted as a soundcloud only release with a not so hidden feature. Early years Kave would discover a love for music and instruments themselves, picking up a multitude of instruments from a very young age. Kave would take music very seriously from a young age singing in choir at school to help his vocal range while he would go home and work on songs that still haven't seen the light of day.

Kave is one of the most streamed music artists coming out of London Ontario, with estimated total streams of over 10 million worldwide. He is credited with being among the top artists from his hometown. Not many know what kave is up to currently but we do know he has been working within the industry to create a better musical space for the artists he's discovering.

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