Draft:Bisen (clan)

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Declined by Theroadislong 3 days ago. Last edited by Theroadislong 3 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: See also the logs for Bisen and Draft:Bisen. bonadea contributions talk 11:52, 3 September 2024 (UTC)

Comment: Instead of linking to a Google Books search result, please provide a page number in the book you use as a source. The "Memoirs on the History, Folk-Lore, and Distribution ..." source does not appear to be useful here – publications from the British Raj are generally not good sources for anything related to Indian clans or castes, and following the link, all I get is a page where the phrase "Bisen Rajputs" occurs, which is not at all the same thing as a source for the information. bonadea contributions talk 11:49, 3 September 2024 (UTC)

Bisen, alternatively spelled as Vishen or Visen, is a Kshatriya(Rajput) clan from India.^[1] ^[2]^[3]

Territories ruled by Bisens

The Bisens held many taluqdari and zamindari estates in Awadh and surrounding regions. Majhauli Raj in Deoria(area of the ancient Malla Mahajanapada) was ruled by Bisen Rajputs. ^[4]^[5]

References

1.A.H. Bingley(1899). Handbook on Rajputs. (pg.54)

^ https://archive.org/details/in.ernet.dli.2015.285102/page/n63/mode/2up
^ Kin Clan Raja and Rule: State-Hinterland Relations in Preindustrial India. Univ of California Press. 15 November 2023. ISBN 978-0-520-32544-9.
^ Memoirs on the History, Folk-Lore, and Distribution of the Races of the North Western Provinces of India; being an amplified Edition of the original: Supplemental Glossary of India Terms by the late Henry M. Elliot. Edited, revised, and re-arranged by John Beames. In 2 Volumes. II. Trübner & Company. 1869.
^ Zamindars and Revenue Farmers of Eastern Uttar Pradesh: From Mughal to Colonial Rule. Anamika Publishers & Distributors. 2004. ISBN 978-81-7975-053-7.
^ The Limited Raj: Agrarian Relations in Colonial India, Saran District, 1793-1920. Univ of California Press. 28 April 2023. ISBN 978-0-520-32960-7.

[1] ttps://archive.org/details/in.ernet.dli.2015.285102/page/n63/mode/2up

[2] Kin Clan Raja and Rule: State-Hinterland Relations in Preindustrial India. Univ of California Press. 15 November 2023. ISBN 978-0-520-32544-9.

[3] Memoirs on the History, Folk-Lore, and Distribution of the Races of the North Western Provinces of India; being an amplified Edition of the original: Supplemental Glossary of India Terms by the late Henry M. Elliot. Edited, revised, and re-arranged by John Beames. In 2 Volumes. II. Trübner & Company. 1869.

[4] Zamindars and Revenue Farmers of Eastern Uttar Pradesh: From Mughal to Colonial Rule. Anamika Publishers & Distributors. 2004. ISBN 978-81-7975-053-7.

[5] The Limited Raj: Agrarian Relations in Colonial India, Saran District, 1793-1920. Univ of California Press. 28 April 2023. ISBN 978-0-520-32960-7.

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