Draft:Battle of Ray (1168)
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Comment: Sources are by the same author/publication so count as a single source but multiple sources are required. Also some of the citations are missing key bibliographic details. S0091 (talk) 19:52, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
Battle of Ray, in the Khwarazmian Empire and Eldiguzids wars.[1]
| Battle of Ray | |||||||||
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| Part of Khwarezmian-Eldiguzid Wars | |||||||||
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| Belligerents | |||||||||
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Il-Arslan Amir Inanch |
Shamsuddin Eldiguz Muhammad Jahan Pahlawan | ||||||||
| Strength | |||||||||
| 20,000 | 60,000 - 80,000 | ||||||||
Background
[edit]Taking advantage of his departure, Amir Inanch took control of Rey with his army and moved to Sava to meet with the army of Khwarezmshah (562/1166-67). After the two armies met, they entered the lands of the Seljuk State of Iraq together. Arslanshah and Jahan Pahlawan, who was with him, did not have enough power, so they sent a message to eldiguz to come to his aid and retreated. In the meantime, some emirs tried to resist the army of İnanç and his ally Khwarezmshah, but they were forced to retreat when the sultan left.[2][3]
Battle
[edit]Amir Inanch was determined to continue the struggle. When he heard that the son of Ali Bar, the governor of Rey, Omar, had been captured, he gathered a large army with the help of Alaeddin Hasan, the ruler of Mazandaran, to recapture his old city, seeing the situation as suitable. Jahan Pahlawan and the other amirs, who were informed of the situation, went to Rey to defend the city. They encountered Inanch's army near Rey and were forced to retreat (1168)[4][5]
References
[edit]- ^ AZERBAYCAN ATABEYLİĞİ'NİN KURULUŞU VE ATABEY İLDENİZ [FOUNDATION OF THE ATABEG PRINCIPALITY OF AZERBAIJAN AND ATABEG ILDENIZ] (in Turkish). Türkiyat Mecmuası: Hüseyin Kayhan. 28/1, 2018. p. 56.
{{cite book}}: Check date values in:|date=(help) - ^ Huseyni, a.g.e., pg. 103-108; Ibnu’l-Esir, el-Kamil.
{{cite book}}: Missing or empty|title=(help)CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link) CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list (link) - ^ Hüseyin, Kayhan. AZERBAYCAN ATABEYLİĞİ'NİN KURULUŞU VE ATABEY İLDENİZ. p. 56.
- ^ Hüseyin Kayhan: AZERBAYCAN ATABEYLİĞİ’NİN KURULUŞU VE ATABEY İLDENİZ Pg.56.
{{cite book}}: Missing or empty|title=(help)CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list (link) - ^ Huseyni, a.g.e., pg. 103-108; Ibnu’l-Esir, el-Kamil.
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