Draft:Albanian ambush on Serbian Soldiers

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Declined by Utopes 34 days ago. Last edited by Utopes 34 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 27 January 2025 by Reading Beans (talk).

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Comment: It is unclear what material the references are supporting. Footnotes would be appreciated; see WP:REFB for assistance if desired. Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 23:29, 27 January 2025 (UTC)

Introduction

The report is from October 20, likely during the First Balkan War (1912-1913), and describes the movements of the Serbian army, consisting of 120,000 men under the command of King Peter I, as it advanced into Ottoman territory while facing harsh weather conditions.

The Ambush

The Arnauts (a historical term for Albanians) ambushed a Serbian company that had been detached from the main force. A group of 70 Serbian soldiers unknowingly marched into the trap and were all killed, with no mercy.