Draft:1st Ergistani Earthalian war (fiction)

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Last edited by Damirburek37 (talk | contribs) 28 days ago. (Update)

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It was the 23rd of November 1893 When the Earthalian Army entered Ergistani soil and after that A full on war was declared The war waged on with the first battle of Auxfier being won by the Earthalian Armies And after a few weeks fought another battle for Kufair Wich resulted in another Earthalian Victory At that point they were heading close to Ergistans 3rd Biggest City Zukagear wich was one of the Most patriotic citites in Ergistan At that point it was the 2nd of January 1894 when the Earthalians reached the outskirts of the city and many Ergistanis volunteered to join the army and protect the city it was a bloody battle half of the city was destroyed but at the end the Ergistanis Ended up Victorious And Pushed the Earthalians all the way to their border by the 27th of April 1894 then the Ergistanis Launched a Counter Offensive which pushed all the way to AlaEarthala A big Earthalian city by the 4th of January 1895 and after the Battle of AlaEarthala The Earthalians officialy surrendered to The ergistanis On the 12th of February 1895