User contributions for Yakofujimato

13 December 2012

• 16:0216:02, 13 December 2012 diff hist 0 Nirvana (band) →Aftermath and posthumous releases: "Backed" infers McCartney was the predominant creative force and that they were support. The song was a collaboration between all 4 men. This was not just "backing McCartney" as weasel wording implies.

28 October 2012

• 01:1801:18, 28 October 2012 diff hist +842 Talk:Jessica Biel No edit summary
• 01:0901:09, 28 October 2012 diff hist −2 m Jessica Biel →2006–present: Minor edit formatting mistake.
• 01:0701:07, 28 October 2012 diff hist −214 Jessica Biel →2006–present: Deleting apparent vandalism (or wrong-headed good faith edits) which utilized continual and numerous request for citations,
• 01:0201:02, 28 October 2012 diff hist −78 Jessica Biel →1997–2002: Deleting vandalism.
• 00:5400:54, 28 October 2012 diff hist −120 Jessica Biel →Career beginnings: Deleting absurd and numerous to a comical degree (almost every sentence) requests for citation being apparently used for the purpose of vandalism. All appear to originate with same editor/vandal.
• 00:4900:49, 28 October 2012 diff hist −34 Jessica Biel Requests for citations, in this case, give all the indication of not being in good faith and in fact an absurd attempt at vandalism. Refer to previous edits for indication of this.
• 00:4500:45, 28 October 2012 diff hist −19 Jessica Biel →2003–2005: This was not a "cameo appearance" but a small part with a character name, dialogue and full screen credit.

27 October 2012

• 19:0919:09, 27 October 2012 diff hist −27 Jessica Biel →Filmography: Deleting vandalism.
• 19:0819:08, 27 October 2012 diff hist −216 Jessica Biel →Filmography: Deleting vandalism hiding as constant requests for citation.
• 18:5918:59, 27 October 2012 diff hist −96 Jessica Biel →2003–2005: Deleting absurd and numerous citation requests.Suspected vandalism,

18 September 2012

• 21:1021:10, 18 September 2012 diff hist −2 Warren G →213: Minor re-wording to correct grammar necessitated by the revision of previous phrase.
• 21:0921:09, 18 September 2012 diff hist 0 Warren G →213: Vernacular "dreamed" un-encyclopedic. Literal meaning would infer this happened while he slept,
• 21:0221:02, 18 September 2012 diff hist −43 Snoop Dogg There is no mention in cited article about Snoop claiming to be Bob Marley "reincarnated" (Marley incidentally died when Snoop was 9 years old).

24 August 2011

• 07:5307:53, 24 August 2011 diff hist +2 Dennis the Menace (1959 TV series) →First season: Wording/grammar "episode was made".
• 07:5007:50, 24 August 2011 diff hist −5 Joseph Kearns →Television: 'The Adventures of Superman' predate 1955, and Lane appeared in episodes prior to that time.
• 07:3907:39, 24 August 2011 diff hist −82 Jay North →Post-acting years: Highly opinionary comments about "forever being typecast". In-encyclopedic.

10 June 2011

• 07:3707:37, 10 June 2011 diff hist −21 Dexter (TV series) The first episode of the show does not fit the definition of a "pilot episode". Pilots are not neccassarily the first episodes of a series, writer appears to not have understood the definition.

9 June 2011

• 07:0807:08, 9 June 2011 diff hist +306 Talk:Armstrong Williams →why is this man controversial amongst black community?
• 07:0207:02, 9 June 2011 diff hist −278 Archie Bunker →Viewer reactions: Entirely un-cited commentary about watchdog groups.
• 06:5906:59, 9 June 2011 diff hist −45 Archie Bunker Un-cited claim. The term "colored" was still regularly used until at least the mid 1970s.
• 06:0306:03, 9 June 2011 diff hist −1 Anthony Weiner →Personal life: Mis-spelling.
• 06:0206:02, 9 June 2011 diff hist +1 Anthony Weiner "Lambasted"? Innapropriate venacular for an encyclopedic entry. Poor casual wording/slang.

28 May 2011

• 00:3900:39, 28 May 2011 diff hist −164 Dawn of the Dead (soundtracks) Deleting innapropriate opinionary language ("much loved", "added humour") reads like a fan blog entry at points. Un-encyclopedic.

11 April 2011

• 13:0113:01, 11 April 2011 diff hist −11 Ed O'Neill →Career: It is evident that the ratings pertain to a television showing. Wording is overly specific, un-needed and odd sounding.
• 12:5912:59, 11 April 2011 diff hist −13 Ed O'Neill →Early life: Ursuline's location was already established at the start of the paragraph. Redundant.

29 October 2010

• 10:1610:16, 29 October 2010 diff hist −1 Alex Sink A more accurate cited link from the same news source.
• 10:1410:14, 29 October 2010 diff hist +24 Alex Sink She is descended from Chang Bunker, not both Eng Bunker who was her ancestors brother. She is not descended from both as they newspaper bizarrely states in it's headline.

24 October 2010

• 06:3506:35, 24 October 2010 diff hist +3 Katy Perry Improper grammar ("perfrormed it to her parents") corrected.
• 06:3206:32, 24 October 2010 diff hist +47 Katy Perry Noting marriage

17 September 2010

• 05:0405:04, 17 September 2010 diff hist −61 Keanu Reeves →External links: Reeves is an American citizen by birth so term "Canadian expatriate" is incorrect here.
• 05:0105:01, 17 September 2010 diff hist −8 Keanu Reeves →Early life: Mother British, but father is "American citizen" a distinction un-explained, un-cited and possibly weasaly! Vague, confusing.

9 August 2010

• 09:0409:04, 9 August 2010 diff hist −244 List of The Brady Bunch characters →Oliver: Deleting opinionary sentence (staing show's cancellation was "inevitable") which cites a page that does not actually confirm the claims made. En-encyclopedic personal commentary.

19 July 2010

• 04:1904:19, 19 July 2010 diff hist −2 Eminem Word "Admitted" assumes the statement is true, but this is disputed. "States" is a factual descriptor.

11 July 2010

• 07:5007:50, 11 July 2010 diff hist −4 Titanic (1997 film) Literary sounding peacock term "transformation" replace by appropriate, more commonly used term.

2 July 2010

• 03:4903:49, 2 July 2010 diff hist −3 Megan Fox →Tattoos: He is now her husband, not ex-fiance.

25 June 2010

• 23:3423:34, 25 June 2010 diff hist +8 The Big Bang (Doctor Who) →DVD release: It is not being released solely on DVD, but on Blu-Ray as the article states.

12 June 2010

• 18:0918:09, 12 June 2010 diff hist 0 Noel Blanc Most of the paragraph read like a press release with inferences that Blanc "inherited" the roles, and that the other voice actors were "helping him out", Biased, dishonestly written. Un-encyclopedic.
• 17:5017:50, 12 June 2010 diff hist +8 Betty White →1939–1979: This was not her first film, as she had appeared in 'Time to Kill', a short film, in 1945.

28 May 2010

• 06:2406:24, 28 May 2010 diff hist −13 Robert Byrd →Byrd in popular culture: Writer is in no position to know if Byrd was "passionate". Peacock phrasing/opinionary/un-encyclopedic.
• 06:2206:22, 28 May 2010 diff hist +1 Robert Byrd →Byrd in popular culture: "a grand shot"??!! Very bizarre peacock wording, opinionary phrase offering praise of the shot. Innapropriate, un-encyclopedic.

27 May 2010

• 16:2416:24, 27 May 2010 diff hist −24 Robert Pattinson "executive producer" is simply a term for who invests capital in a film, it does not merit inclusion as a title in the opening sentence, as "producer' might.

22 May 2010

• 20:3220:32, 22 May 2010 diff hist +163 Don Draper Adding warning regarding name change visible only in source code.

21 May 2010

• 17:1717:17, 21 May 2010 diff hist +319 Angelina Jolie Noting recent Jon Voight/Angelina Jolie family reunion.
• 16:4216:42, 21 May 2010 diff hist −34 Dakota Johnson →Personal life: If her exact height is not known, then there should be no mention of it. "roughly 5'7" is un-encyclopedic.
• 16:3916:39, 21 May 2010 diff hist −13 Riley Keough →Personal life: Deleting un-needed, bizarre descriptor "full blooded". Term 'brother' is sufficiently descriptive.

15 May 2010

• 06:1906:19, 15 May 2010 diff hist −134 Talk:Emmett Till →Know definitions and your history.: Deleting commercial link to amazon.com product page.
• 06:1806:18, 15 May 2010 diff hist +218 User talk:68.28.230.230 →Emmett Till
• 06:1306:13, 15 May 2010 diff hist +896 User talk:68.28.230.230 No edit summary

3 May 2010

• 17:2417:24, 3 May 2010 diff hist +36 Seth Green Adding relevant category.