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21:2221:22, 26 April 2010 diff hist −444 Star Wars (film) →Radio drama: Remove the sentence about canon. This is the only mention of canon on the article. We should keep it out, IMO, as only super fanboys know what it is, or want to know.
21:1021:10, 26 April 2010 diff hist +332 Talk:Star Wars (film) →Novelization sales: new section
21:0621:06, 26 April 2010 diff hist +101 Star Wars (film) →Cinematic influence: Improve the Ebert quote from a limp description and emphasize that it was transformative. Improve parody line.
21:0121:01, 26 April 2010 diff hist 0 m Star Wars (film) →Cinematic and literary allusions: Typo
21:0021:00, 26 April 2010 diff hist −19 Star Wars (film) →Writing: Typo, and try to explain the out-of-context Apocalypse Now claim. (I think it should probably be minimized in importance or removed.)
18:3918:39, 26 April 2010 diff hist +151 Talk:Star Wars (film) →Parodies
18:3918:39, 26 April 2010 diff hist +925 Talk:Star Wars (film) →Ford casting: new section
18:3518:35, 26 April 2010 diff hist −16 Star Wars (film) →Cast: Remove unnecessary mind reading flourish in Daniels quote
18:3018:30, 26 April 2010 diff hist −281 Star Wars (film) →Cast: Copy edit. Remove Wedge, who certainly gets less screen time than the unmentioned Uncle Owen, for example.
18:2418:24, 26 April 2010 diff hist +62 Star Wars (film) →Plot: copy edit
18:0518:05, 26 April 2010 diff hist +286 Video game publisher →Investor interest: add EA is in the Fortune 500

18:1418:14, 16 April 2010 diff hist −2,362 20th century Remove "Events" section. This should be an encyclopedia article about the 20th century and not a miscellaneous list of hundreds of events. There's already a link to a subarticle for that.
18:1118:11, 16 April 2010 diff hist +156 20th century →Summary: Copy edit the section
17:4217:42, 16 April 2010 diff hist −66 20th century Copy edit the first section
17:3217:32, 16 April 2010 diff hist +79 The PJs →Characters: Add back the portrait of the characters. It's a non-free image with fair use asserted.

22:0422:04, 15 March 2010 diff hist +4 m Apollo 1 →1961 Soviet oxygen fire: "died" -> "had died" to emphasize it was earlier
22:0122:01, 15 March 2010 diff hist +67 Apollo 1 →Command module design worries: Some copy editing, albeit mostly on fact-tagged sentences.
21:4421:44, 15 March 2010 diff hist +25 Space Shuttle Columbia disaster →Initial investigation: Fact-tag weaselly "This led to many accusations of environmental pressures leading to the foam strikes."
21:4321:43, 15 March 2010 diff hist +10 Space Shuttle Columbia disaster →Recovery of debris: "which" tag on the claim that "the landing gear" was found. The cited source does not say.
21:2321:23, 15 March 2010 diff hist +792 Talk:Space Shuttle Challenger disaster →PEAPs photo: new section
21:1921:19, 15 March 2010 diff hist +146 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster →Cause and time of death: Insert PEAPs photo, but it's from a later Shuttle flight. I have mixed feelings; see discussion page.
21:1621:16, 15 March 2010 diff hist +25 Personal Egress Air Pack Fact-tag that the PEAPs were removed after the Challenger disaster.
21:1521:15, 15 March 2010 diff hist +97 Personal Egress Air Pack Add photo
20:4520:45, 15 March 2010 diff hist −80 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster Remove from intro " and inspired the 1990 television movie, ''Challenger''." Undue weight in the intro.

00:4500:45, 27 February 2010 diff hist +24 Space Race →Sputnik 1: Add "replica pictured" to sputnik caption, per the note on the image page on Commons
00:4200:42, 27 February 2010 diff hist +20 Huntington's disease →Ethics: Fix UK insurers' line to "The United Kingdom's insurance companies have agreed that until 2014 they will not use this information when writing most insurance policies."

22:4322:43, 26 February 2010 diff hist +12 Costa Rica →Government: Clarify tag on the coy, smirking claim, "...their presidential election history shows otherwise".
22:4322:43, 26 February 2010 diff hist −39 Costa Rica →Government: Replace Arias photo with the now-more-relevant Chinchilla photo
22:4122:41, 26 February 2010 diff hist +68 Laura Chinchilla Improve the photo. Move the previous photo to a new location further down the page.