User contributions for Stephen Hui

8 September 2024

• 19:5919:59, 8 September 2024 diff hist +12‎ Battle of Cape Matapan ‎ →‎Bletchley Park (GC&CS): Rephrased a very informally written sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:4616:46, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Battle of Cape Matapan ‎ →‎Battle: Improper noun "Fleet" --> "fleet" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:4516:45, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Battle of Cape Matapan ‎ "Peninsula" --> "peninsula" as, far as I can tell, it's not part of the proper name of the location Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

7 September 2024

• 18:3618:36, 7 September 2024 diff hist +1‎ Franz von Holzhausen ‎ →‎Personal life: Added a comma midsentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

6 September 2024

• 20:0820:08, 6 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Laura McBain ‎ →‎After Bellamy's: Clarified which company McBain left in 2019, as the previous wording was ambiguous current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 00:2400:24, 6 September 2024 diff hist −11‎ Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder ‎ "temporally delayed" --> "delayed"; a temporal delay is the only kind of delay current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 September 2024

• 05:2605:26, 5 September 2024 diff hist +38‎ m Pierre Trudeau ‎ Reversed unexplained deletion of Trudeau's mother's name from the infobox Tag: Reverted
• 05:1205:12, 5 September 2024 diff hist +41‎ m Pierre-sur-Haute military radio station ‎ Rephrased the clunky opening sentence; no content changes

3 September 2024

• 04:1104:11, 3 September 2024 diff hist +11‎ M51 Skysweeper ‎ →‎See also: Reworded a link in the See Also section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

2 September 2024

• 01:3101:31, 2 September 2024 diff hist −4‎ Beaumont-Hamel Newfoundland Memorial ‎ →‎Site: Section heading "The Site" --> "Site" per MOS:HEAD ("Section headings should generally follow the guidance for article titles") and MOS:AT ("Do not use articles (a, an, or the) as the first word") current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

1 September 2024

• 04:2804:28, 1 September 2024 diff hist −4‎ Pierre Trudeau ‎ →‎Second World War: Section heading "The Second World War" --> "Second World War" per MOS:HEAD ("Section headings should generally follow the guidance for article titles") and MOS:AT ("Do not use articles (a, an, or the) as the first word") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

24 August 2024

• 01:3201:32, 24 August 2024 diff hist −6‎ Japanese spider crab ‎ →‎Description: "outstanding size" --> "large size" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:3101:31, 24 August 2024 diff hist 0‎ Japanese spider crab ‎ →‎Description: Changed capitalized mid-sentence words to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20 August 2024

• 20:0020:00, 20 August 2024 diff hist 0‎ Cosmoline ‎ →‎See also: Changed a link from title case to sentence case Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

18 August 2024

• 07:5107:51, 18 August 2024 diff hist +429‎ Wikipedia:WikiProject Korea/Assessment ‎ Requesting reassessment of importance of Proposed Peace Treaty on the Korean Peninsula current
• 07:4307:43, 18 August 2024 diff hist +5‎ Proposed Peace Treaty on the Korean Peninsula ‎ Replaced "a single Korea is a jackpot for the entirety of Northeast Asia" with "would be a great benefit for neighboring countries" even though the person cited used the word "jackpot", per MOS:IDIOM ("if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording"), and WP:SYNTH (the original quote referred to "all neighboring countries", but the Wikipedia paraphrase referred to "the entirety of Northeast Asia") current
• 07:3907:39, 18 August 2024 diff hist +30‎ History of Korea ‎ Replaced vague "find unity" with an excerpt from the Panmunjom Declaration: "promote [the] common prosperity and reunification of Korea"
• 07:2107:21, 18 August 2024 diff hist −99‎ Proposed Peace Treaty on the Korean Peninsula ‎ Deleted image of "fictional treaty giving an idea of what one could look like" per Wikipedia:No original research: "Wikipedia articles must not contain original research [...] original research means material—such as facts, allegations, and ideas—for which no reliable, published source exists"
• 07:0307:03, 18 August 2024 diff hist −11‎ m History of Korea ‎ Copy edit; no content changes Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

10 August 2024

• 18:1718:17, 10 August 2024 diff hist +15‎ m AZP S-60 ‎ "South-East" --> "Southeast" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

9 August 2024

• 06:5506:55, 9 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Manfred Roeder ‎ Informal "sacking" --> "firing" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 August 2024

• 19:3219:32, 5 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ Landing Craft Tank (Rocket) ‎ Removed unnecessary comma from image caption Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 19:3119:31, 5 August 2024 diff hist 0‎ m USNS Guam ‎ Grammar: midsentence "The Navy" --> "the Navy" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 19:2719:27, 5 August 2024 diff hist +28‎ Sea Fighter (FSF-1) ‎ →‎Concerns: Flagged unattributed "some concern has been raised" with {{By whom}} template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 17:3617:36, 5 August 2024 diff hist +101‎ Mark 38 25 mm machine gun system ‎ Tagged article as needing an update, as it doesn't reflect the fact that the first MOD 4 has been installed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

4 August 2024

• 07:3607:36, 4 August 2024 diff hist +10‎ m Ceremonial Guard (Canada) ‎ Replaced the not-very-descriptive section heading "Extra" with "Other activities" current
• 05:1205:12, 4 August 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Axel Merckx ‎ Indirectly capitalized improper noun "Riders" --> "riders" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:1105:11, 4 August 2024 diff hist −11‎ m Axel Merckx ‎ "cracking the top 10" --> "best finish was tenth" per MOS:IDIOM: "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

24 July 2024

• 00:5900:59, 24 July 2024 diff hist −24‎ m German battleship Scharnhorst ‎ Copy edit, including rewording of "sowed the seeds of doubt" per MOS:IDIOM: "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording"

22 July 2024

• 06:2506:25, 22 July 2024 diff hist −11‎ m Battle of the North Cape ‎ Reworded a sentence with two ands Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:1506:15, 22 July 2024 diff hist +6‎ m German battleship Scharnhorst ‎ Reworded two sentences to get rid of clunky parentheses Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20 July 2024

• 18:2118:21, 20 July 2024 diff hist +1‎ m 2024 Canadian wildfires ‎ Grammar: "re-ignite as early as February" --> "re-ignited as early as February" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:2002:20, 20 July 2024 diff hist +1‎ m 2024 CrowdStrike incident ‎ Grammar: "Asia first experience" --> "Asia first experienced" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

19 July 2024

• 01:0001:00, 19 July 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Hikikomori ‎ Replaced ampersand with "and" per MOS:AMPERSAND Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

16 July 2024

• 04:3504:35, 16 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Fentanyl ‎ Moved a citation outside a bracket per WP:CITEFOOT: "citation markers are normally placed after adjacent punctuation" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

13 July 2024

• 06:3706:37, 13 July 2024 diff hist −3‎ Antilia (building) ‎ Copy edit of sentence describing the house's location on Billionaires' Row, a proper noun Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:3406:34, 13 July 2024 diff hist −7‎ m Antilia (building) ‎ Reorganized the opening paragraph; no content changes Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:5005:50, 13 July 2024 diff hist −1‎ Wayans family ‎ Changed Dwayne Wayans' description from past tense to present tense since he's still alive current
• 05:4905:49, 13 July 2024 diff hist −2‎ Dwayne Wayans ‎ Changed opening paragraph from past tense to present tense since Wayans is still alive
• 05:2105:21, 13 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ Louis Wolfson ‎ Changed the first letter of as quoted sentence fragment to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:1205:12, 13 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ Earl Warren ‎ →‎Retirement: Moved a citation outside a bracket per WP:CITEFOOT: "citation markers are normally placed after adjacent punctuation" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:0405:04, 13 July 2024 diff hist −21‎ Dred Scott ‎ →‎Abolitionist aid to Scott's case: Clarified an oddly worded caption Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:4704:47, 13 July 2024 diff hist −6‎ Legend-class cutter ‎ →‎Mission: "Military/naval" --> "military", as the "naval" part is implied for a ship, plus per MOS:SLASH, "Generally, avoid joining two words with a slash [...] Replace with clearer wording." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:4404:44, 13 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ High endurance cutter ‎ →‎Coast Guard destroyers: Changed section heading to sentence case per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should […] be presented in sentence case not title case" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:4204:42, 13 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ USCGC Taney ‎ Changed improper noun "High Endurance Cutter" to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

12 July 2024

• 01:2101:21, 12 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ USS Mississippi (CGN-40) ‎ →‎Gallery: Capitalized the first letter in a caption Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:2101:21, 12 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ USS Mississippi (CGN-40) ‎ →‎Decommissioning: Capitalized the first letter in a sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

11 July 2024

• 02:1702:17, 11 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ German corvette Hiddensee ‎ →‎Ship history: "Chief Operating Officer" --> "chief operating officer" per MOS:JOBTITLE: "positions such as president [...] are common nouns and therefore should be in lower case when used generically" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

8 July 2024

• 15:1115:11, 8 July 2024 diff hist +37‎ Lewis Hamilton ‎ →‎Legal issues: Marked speculation about watch sponsorships with the {{speculation inline}} template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

7 July 2024

• 07:3807:38, 7 July 2024 diff hist 0‎ Nelson-class battleship ‎ →‎Superstructure: Changed several incorrectly capitalized words to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit