Wikipedia:Peer review/Indian road network
I request to have a peer review on this article --naveenpf (talk) 03:47, 19 March 2010 (UTC)
Review by Fredddie
[edit]When I review, I like to review a section at a time, breaking down each sentence if it needs to be done. It takes longer, but it results in a better product. –Fredddie™ 03:40, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Lead
- Per WP:LEADCITE, unless there are contentious facts, don't cite anything in the lead. Since the lead is a summary of the entire article, anything that you would cite in the lead should be covered sufficiently in the article.
- Conversion from kilometers to miles is inconsistent, especially with the density figures. I recommend using {{Convert}} for everything just to be safe. I'll do a few of them myself.
- Avoid false precision. Example: 3.314 million km, but only 2.1 million miles
- I would move the density figures from the US, China, and Brazil to the main section of the article. They seem out of place in the lead.
- This is an article about India, monetary figures should be in INR, with USD and/or EUR conversions.