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Xenosaga (series)

This article was recently peer reviewed by the CVG project. I feel that this article has shown some improvement over the past month, but it could still use some work. I would like to know what needs to be fixed, expanded, improved, deleted, edited, and so on. I am hoping that us editors can get this article featured in the not-so-distant future. Anything and everything would be appreciated. Deckiller 00:30, 27 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The current formatting of the "Story" section is a bit awkward. Just think of someone who knows nothing of this game series (like me) reading the article for the first time. Every time he finds a new concept, he has to go to the List of terms and come back here. This is not practical. It is much better to have these concepts explained in the plot, remove all the wikilinks, and have a single link at the bottom of the article to the list of terms. The section "series controversy" needs more sources, and could also be expanded. I would also like to see a section on the impact this video game had on audiences and game critics. (But with sources, please; no "it is widely regarded as" ;-))JoaoRicardo^talk 15:11, 30 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes; originally, when the page was split, the cricicism and impact was included but that, along with 5-6 good citations, was lost from the main section during the split. I'll get on with it ASAP. BTW, I've been trying to keep on top of the cruft being added, including evil weasel words ^_^ Deckiller 19:49, 30 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]