Wikipedia:Peer review/Poison Ivy (character)/archive1

Poison Ivy (character)

I would appreciate comments on any part of the article to try and improve the overall quality. Be as critical as you'd like. :)Carnyfoke 00:56, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like some notes as to why the character became popular due to feminism, as described in the lead. Wiki-newbie 20:38, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 16:49, 26 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The major flaw in this article is it is largely written in an in-universe perspective, plainly recanting highlights from the comics etc. Until this is addressed, the article will remain poor. Check recent featured articles on fictional characters which may provide some inspiration.

There's nothing dealing with the character's concept and eventual creation which is needed.
The character's evolution as a human being especially needs writing in an out of universe perspective, drawing comparisons to how each individual author portrayed Poison Ivy.

Additionally, the trivia section needs swift addressing. Integrate noteworthy info into appropriate sections of the article, and then rid of the other info, which'll thus eradicate the dreaded trivia section. LuciferMorgan 03:26, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]