Wikipedia:Peer review/North Korean abductions of Japanese/archive1

North Korean abductions of Japanese

I discovered the existence of this page a few days ago, and was appalled at its incompleteness, even though the subject it deals with is fairly important and high-profile. I've gone through the article, adding various facts from news sources and from other reliable websites and citing sources, but the article still needs expansion and citing. I would appreciate any comments or edits that might help improve this article. Thanks, Tangot a ngo 07:12, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

If you are just looking for help fixing up the page, you could try Wikipedia:Pages needing attention. Yes it needs the "citation needed" tags to be addressed. Even a solid newspaper reference would be sufficient, I think. It could also use an image or two; perhaps of some of the victims. Japan, Japanese government, Osaka, Chief Cabinet Secretary and United States could be linked. Otherwise it is starting to look pretty decent. Thanks. — RJH 15:28, 5 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments, RJHall. I was wondering if fellow Wikipedians could provide some insight into this article as a whole to improve it, maybe it was a little early for that. Nevertheless, I'll be looking for images and sources per your suggestion. Cheers, Tangot a ngo 03:55, 6 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]