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Wrote this article recently. I would like some review of it maybe to add anything anyone might know or to find any mistakes I have over looked.

(Gangland 02:32, 19 March 2006 (UTC))[reply]

  • I would suggest converting the bold subtitles to subsubheadings using ==== subtitle ====. Also, if the external links were used as sources, consider changing it to "References" instead of "External links". AndyZ 02:05, 20 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]