Wikipedia:Peer review/Battlefield 2142/archive1

Battlefield 2142

I would like a review of the overall section, what can be done to improve it. The article has been tremendously improved since December with a lot of the "game guide" sections completely removed as well as a lot of references has been added. Pem bro ke 03:01, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Like I tell pretty much everyone, a reception section is essential. The lead needs expanded, and I'm not sure why there's a section dedicated to describing how to put it in widescreen mode. Nifboy 03:56, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I added a reception section with three references accompanying it as well as expanded the LEAD. The widescreen support I was contemplating on removing due to it's format, but it was meant to explain how to bypass EA's arrogant block against widescreen. If I remove that section, what else do you think needs improvement? Your input is very valuable. Pem bro ke 05:50, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I think the next logical step is to further expand the reception section: What did reviewers like/dislike about the game? The story is already mentioned, but what else is there? Nifboy 17:59, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

There's no way the widescreen support section belongs: Wikipedia is not a game guide. As for the trivia section, I advise you integrate that information into the rest of the article, as folks at GA and FA usually go ape at the sight of the word. Seegoon 16:13, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I removed the widescreen support and merged some of the trivia information to relating sectioms. What else do you thinks needs to be done? Pem bro ke 17:38, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 23:05, 5 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]