Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Featured log/December 2024
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- Nominator(s): —JCMLuis 💬 13:17, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The 2019 Pacific typhoon season was the costliest season ever recorded, due to several very destructive tropical cyclones that occurred. The most destructive of them all was Typhoon Hagibis, which made landfall over Japan in October and became the most damaging typhoon on record at the time, while also directly killing 118 people. Besides Hagibis, Typhoon Lekima brought havoc over China in August, becoming the second-costliest typhoon in the nation's history at the time, and Typhoon Faxai made landfall over Japan in September, becoming the costliest disaster of the year until Hagibis. In terms of activity, the season was above-average, with 29 named storms forming, of which 17 became typhoons. The season also featured the most powerful typhoon to occur in February, that being Typhoon Wutip.
This is (probably) the first attempt to get a Pacific typhoon season timeline into FL status. While making this timeline, I asked Dylan620 (talk · contribs), who made several Pacific hurricane season timelines that became featured lists, for help with the formatting and alternative texts. I will try my best to respond to any concerns with the timeline. —JCMLuis 💬 13:17, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support, with the caveat that I have helped out at certain points (as Luis mentions in his nomination statement). I'd argue that Luis's work with this timeline is more impressive than the EPAC and Atlantic timeline FLs I've helped to promote this year – not only because of the sheer quantity of systems (the WPAC is typically the most active of all the world's tropical cyclone basins), but because this timeline thoroughly includes information from not just one, but two major warning agencies. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 01:00, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comment
[edit]The 2019 Pacific typhoon season consisted of the events that occurred in the annual cycle of tropical cyclone formation over the western North Pacific Ocean and the South China Sea.
-->The 2019 Pacific typhoon season was the annual cycle of tropical cyclone formation over the western North Pacific Ocean and the South China Sea, primarily in 2019.
or something similar.- Changed. I'm assuming the "primarily in 2019" part is because of Pabuk forming in 2018.
which wrought damage to Japan
wrought comes across as a little unencyclopedic. "Inflicted" or "caused"?- Changed to inflicted.
Wow, no other comments. Really nice work JCMLuis. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:53, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Gonzo fan2007: I have addressed your concerns. —JCMLuis 💬 21:48, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:29, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support from Crisco
[edit]- Images:
- File:Typhoon Wutip's Eyewall Replacement Cycle(2019).gif satellite is Japanese, source goes to a .edu website. Where does the NOAA come into play?
- Replaced license for every image produced by Himawari-8.
- File:Wutip 2019-02-25 0600Z.png satellite is Japanese, source goes to a .edu website. Where does the NOAA come into play?
- Ditto
- Check images for bare URL sources, which are subject to link rot. For example, File:Wipha 2019-08-02 0605Z.jpg does not lead to an image of the storm.
- Replaced links so it should lead to the image of the storm. Unfortunately for the images from the NOAA View Global Data Explorer, the data now only goes back to January 1, 2021, and going to Internet Archive does not work. The satellite it uses is NOAA-20, which can also be found in NASA Worldview, but there are some differences between images in both websites, such as a noticeable slant that would not be found in NOAA's website. (Example: original vs same thing in Worldview) Should I switch the sources to Worldview regardless?
- That might require a consensus at the weather-focused Wikiprojects. I think that the images are sufficiently similar that whatever linking tool you used to get the second link would work to satisfy WP:V. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I decided to put the Worldview links for the image alongside the original link to NOAA's explorer as an alternative.
- That might require a consensus at the weather-focused Wikiprojects. I think that the images are sufficiently similar that whatever linking tool you used to get the second link would work to satisfy WP:V. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Replaced links so it should lead to the image of the storm. Unfortunately for the images from the NOAA View Global Data Explorer, the data now only goes back to January 1, 2021, and going to Internet Archive does not work. The satellite it uses is NOAA-20, which can also be found in NASA Worldview, but there are some differences between images in both websites, such as a noticeable slant that would not be found in NOAA's website. (Example: original vs same thing in Worldview) Should I switch the sources to Worldview regardless?
- Overall, many of these NASA sources are not static; I clicked on one and got current weather, rather than information from 2019. That hurts the verifiability of the content.
- Ditto
- File:Typhoon Wutip's Eyewall Replacement Cycle(2019).gif satellite is Japanese, source goes to a .edu website. Where does the NOAA come into play?
- Prose:
- Why not link tropical cyclone?
- Linked
- from autumn 2018 to spring 2019. - Although everything is northern hemisphere, barely (a couple of the southernmost storms appear to only be a few hundred kilometres from the equator), much of the southern part of the range doesn't have a clearly defined autumn or spring. Per WP:SEASONS, I'd expect this to be phrased more objectively.
- Changed using examples from WP:SEASON.
- The conditions became neutral during the summer, as strong activity occurred in the monsoon trough over Southeast Asia in August, promoting tropical cyclogenesis. - Same
- Changed.
- 令和元年東日本台風の発生した令和元年の水害被害額が統計開始以来最大に令和元年の水害被害額(確報値)を公表 and other East Asian-script sources should use script-title= with the ISO two digit code for the language.
- Added parameter. Please let me know if I used it wrong.
- Looks good! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Added parameter. Please let me know if I used it wrong.
- Not going to do a full source review, but I note that the capitalization of source titles is inconsistent (compare, for example, Ref 4 and Ref 21). — Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:04, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not sure what's inconsistent with refs 4 and 21. Were you previewing the timeline of events section when you made this comment, and meant to refer to refs 18 and 34?
- No, I meant 4 and 21. Compare "The strongest February typhoon on record packs 180 mph gusts, sideswiping Guam". (sentence case) and "Monthly Global Tropical Cyclone Tracks April 2019". (title case). Per WP:CITESTYLE, we should maintain consistency within the article (sentence case is consistent with APA, whereas title case is consistent with MLA). — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Crisco 1492: So would changing ref 4 to "The Strongest February Typhoon On Record Packs 180 mph Gusts, Sideswiping Guam" make it consistent? Sorry, I'm not completely familiarized with capitalization in source titles. —JCMLuis 💬 22:10, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- That's just an example, JCMLuis, but something like "The Strongest February Typhoon on Record Packs 180 mph Gusts, Sideswiping Guam" would go toward consistency if you want to use title case. (On is a particle, which isn't capitalized). There are still several other sources that use sentence case as well (2, 5, 6, 9, 10, etc.) — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:13, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Everything should be in title case now.
- That's just an example, JCMLuis, but something like "The Strongest February Typhoon on Record Packs 180 mph Gusts, Sideswiping Guam" would go toward consistency if you want to use title case. (On is a particle, which isn't capitalized). There are still several other sources that use sentence case as well (2, 5, 6, 9, 10, etc.) — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:13, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not sure what's inconsistent with refs 4 and 21. Were you previewing the timeline of events section when you made this comment, and meant to refer to refs 18 and 34?
- Why not link tropical cyclone?
@Crisco 1492: I've responded to your comments. Please let me know what you think. —JCMLuis 💬 21:36, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Responded. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Crisco 1492: added two responses regarding capitalization and source linking. —JCMLuis 💬 22:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good! Happy to support. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:47, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 03:53, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC) [2].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Mattximus (talk) 16:42, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Let's keep it going. Here is one more list of municipalities with a standardized format that now includes 50 (!!) lists of municipalities all around the world. Inspired by these real encyclopedias with consistent formatting and high standard, the project is taking shape. I tried to incorporate changes from previous nominations but I'm sure I've missed some and there can always be improvements. Thanks for your reviews! Mattximus (talk) 16:42, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Steelkamp
[edit]- "The largest municipality by land area is Tlaquiltenango which spans 543.90 km2 (210.00 sq mi), and the smallest is Hueyapan with 19.20 km2 (7.41 sq mi)." I recommend commas be placed like so: "The largest municipality by land area is Tlaquiltenango, which spans 543.90 km2 (210.00 sq mi), and the smallest is Hueyapan, with 19.20 km2 (7.41 sq mi)."
- Done
- Cuautla in the lead should be linked.
- Done
- "responsible for providing all the public services for their constituents". Is it really true that all public services are provided by the municipality. The following sentences seem to say that the state and federal governments provide education, emergency fire and medical services, environmental protection and maintenance of monuments and historical landmarks. Could this be changed to ""responsible for providing public services for their constituents"?
- Done - this is much better wording, thanks!
- "On November 9, 2017, the state legislature approved the creation of four indigenous municipalities (Coatetelco, Xoxocotla, Hueyapan and Tetelcingo), effective on January 1, 2019. However, due to objections by authorities in Cuautla, it was decided on July 26, 2018 that Tetelcingo would not be included in the list of new municipalities." This should be reworded to say the most important part up front: that these are the newest municipalities in Morelos. Otherwise one wonders why four seemingly random municipalities are being mentioned.
- Done - this is a good suggestion, I think I reworded it correctly
- That's a good way to word it.
- The incorporation date for the three municipalities created on January 1, 2019 should be sourced in the table as well. The current source at the column heading only goes as far as 1995.
- Done
That's all. Steelkamp (talk) 06:42, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks Steelkamp for an excellent review. No issues, all suggestions made. Mattximus (talk) 00:34, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Steelkamp (talk) 08:17, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]- "Tetelcingo would not be included in the list of new municipalities" - this is slightly confusing as it sounds like the municipality was still created, it just wasn't included on some list somewhere. So was it in fact not created at all?
- Fixed wording.
- Photo captions don't need full stops as they are not sentences
- Fixed captions with better wording as well
- "the oldest date in which the municipality is referred to is included" => "the earliest year in which the municipality is referred to is listed" would read much better
- Fixed, agree that's much better wording.
- That's what I got -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:55, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks ChrisTheDude! Excellent review, and I've made all changes, no issues. Mattximus (talk) 00:38, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:22, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from OlifanofmrTenanant
[edit]I'll take a look but the first thing that jumps out is Hueyapan is linked twice in the final paragraph. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 21:12, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Done
- Footnotes C,D, and H could very loosely be seen as unsourced, especially since the notes about name changes are sourced.
- Done
- The states of Mexico list is linked twice in the first paragraph
- Done
- It is also linked in the body as state capital. Could you explain the connection?
- Done - I just removed the link, I don't think one is needed here.
- All I found, ping me when needed Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 21:27, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks so much OlifanofmrTennant! All your concerns have been addressed, no issues! Mattximus (talk) 00:09, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 03:53, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by Hey man im josh via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC) [3].[reply]
- Nominator(s): ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:52, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
After countless lists of number ones, I thought I would try something different for my next FLC. I'd just been listening to the new 40th anniversary deluxe edition of the Pogues' debut album and decided to have a go at this one. I added a lead, images, and (I think) pretty much doubled the size of the list by adding all the songs that were not on the original versions of their seven studio albums. A couple of things I was not 100% certain about (and couldn't really find any guidance on) and am happy to change if people think I should:
- Many songs were released only on singles (this is a band whose entire recording career took place when music was actually released physically, kids ) but later added to re-issued versions of albums anything up to 20 years later. I showed the album for these as "none" as their first release was not on an album, but I can change that and show the album (maybe with "20XX re-issue" in brackets) if that would be better.
- Several dozen songs here were unreleased until they appeared in a 2008 box set. For all of these I showed the date as 2008 as that is when they were first released, but I can change that to the date they were recorded, although this might be inconsistent with others as (for example) all the tracks on an album released in January 1988 (as one of theirs was) were almost certainly not recorded in 1988.
Let me know your thoughts on the above and on anything else you think needs fixing. I've never worked on one of these lists before so there may be quite a lot that needs finessing...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:52, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
NØ
[edit]- The band seems to be currently active according to their article, so should the introductory sentence say "have recorded" instead of "recorded"?
- Changed. It was literally yesterday that the band announced that they will be touring again next year, prior to this it seemed that they would not continue following MacGowan's death -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "which centred primarily on drinking culture and the seedier side of London life" - Is there a simpler term than seedier that might be easier for a general audience to understand? Although, personally I love the jargon, lol.
- Changed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "If I Should Fall from Grace with God (1988) incorporated a wider of range of musical styles, including Turkish and Spanish influences on the tracks "Turkish Song of the Damned" and "Fiesta" respectively, and songs written by newer band members Philip Chevron and Terry Woods." - Just "wider range" should probably work. Also, there should probably be a comma before "respectively"
- Changed - the first one was just a typo -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "After the 1996 album Pogue Mahone, which included versions of songs originally recorded by Ronnie Lane and Bob Dylan" - I would say "cover versions" instead of just versions
- Changed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "The band also recorded songs not included on their seven studio albums, including many which appeared as the B-sides of singles." - "The band also recorded songs that did not appear on their seven studio albums, including many which appeared as the B-sides of singles." for minor repetition avoidance
- Changed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "They contributed original songs to the soundtracks of the films Sid and Nancy and Straight to Hell" - maybe the years the films were released could be included in parenthesis
- Changed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Great work as always! The table looks perfect to me.--NØ 15:50, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @MaranoFan: - thanks for your review. All points addressed! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support--NØ 16:10, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Crisco
[edit]- Image review:
- File:Pogues Munich 2011.jpg - Image quality is a bit rough. Unfortunately, not actionable as the band does not seem to have gotten many quality images of them.
- File:Shane-MacGowan.jpg - Looks good
- File:Jem Finer Pogues.jpg - Licensing looks good. Needs an English-language description.
- File:The Pogues in NYC 14.jpg - Looks good
- File:DylanYoungKilkenny140719v2 (50 of 52) (52246124397) (cropped).jpg - Ideally Dylan should be identified specifically in the description, as the image has been cropped to only him (no Neil Young)
- File:Keith Richards, Mick Jagger performing with Rolling Stones at Prudential Center 2012-12-13.jpg - Looks good
- File:20180705-Rudolstadt-Festival-Steve Earle-and-the-Dukes-4821 (cropped).jpg - Looks good.
- File:Kirsty MacColl at Double Door Chicago.png - Looks good.
- Prose
- Shane MacGowan (vocals), Peter "Spider" Stacy (tin whistle), and Jem Finer (banjo) formed the band in 1982 along with James Fearnley (accordion), initially under the name Pogue Mahone, an anglicisation of the Irish phrase póg mo thóin, meaning "kiss my arse". - That's an awful lot of subordinate clauses and noun phrases. Simplifying may help
- Otherwise looks good. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 20:09, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Crisco 1492: - done!! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:58, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good! Happy to Support — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:20, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hey man im josh
[edit]Source review: Passed
- Reliable enough for the information being cited
- Consistent date formatting
- Consistent and proper reference formatting
- Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
- Spot checks on 10 sources match what they are being cited for
- Assumed good faith on some inaccessible sources
Feedback:
- Ref 8 – Access is restricted to those with an account (subscription maybe?), please mark as such
- I can access it OK without an account, albeit there's a box at the bottom that says "This is your last free article"?? Anyhow, I marked it as subscription needed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:52, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That's all I've got. Good stuff as always Chris. Hey man im josh (talk) 20:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Hey man im josh: - thanks - see above -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:52, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Hey man im josh (talk) 19:30, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by Hey man im josh via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 10 December 2024 (UTC) [4].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:20, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Another one of these New Zealand Heritage List nominations! This one's a bit bigger than the previous few, coming in at 30 entries. Tauranga is definitely one of the more obscure cities in New Zealand - it's a sleepy little town that seems to mainly attract retirees - but it has some interesting military and colonial history nevertheless! Thanks to all you reviewers :3 Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:20, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]- Image caption end with a period.
- That'd be against MOS:CAPTION unless it's a full sentence. -G
- The majority of entries in the list are missing images. IMO these images should exist in thumbnails on the side of the list (similar to List of Seattle Sounders FC players)
- If a Wikimedian visits Tauranga and snaps some pics, most of these will get images. I want to leave the slots open for when/if that happens. - G
- Images that don't have alt text should have alt text
- Fixed, thank you for catching that. -G
Heritage New Zealand classification of sites on the New Zealand Heritage List / Rārangi Kōrero, in accordance with the Heritage New Zealand Pouhere Taonga Act 2014, distinguishes between Category 1 ("places of special or outstanding historical or cultural significance") and Category 2 ("places of historic or cultural significance").
- first clause in the sentence should be shortened or broken into multiple sentences.
- Done. - G
- Brindille1 (talk) 01:48, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Brindille1: Thank you for the review! Responded. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:47, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Brindille1 (talk) 13:23, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Brindille1: Thank you for the review! Responded. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:47, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]- "Home to large Māori settlements during the precolonial era, European presence began" - there's some grammatical disagreement here - "European presence" wasn't home to large Maori settlements. Suggest "European presence began in the early 1830s in the area, which had been home to large Māori settlements during the precolonial era, as traders began settling around the shores of Tauranga Harbour."
- "from 1908 to 1987, where it has since seen various business tenants" - "where" doesn't really work here. Suggest "from 1908 to 1987, and has since seen various business tenants"
- That's it, I think! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:29, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Reworded the first and implemented the latter! Thank you. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:44, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:49, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dylan620
[edit]Disclosing upfront that I came here through the unofficial Wikimedia Discord server. Marking myself down for a review, will report back in the next couple days. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 20:44, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Actually, I had more time tonight than I had anticipated, so I was able to bang out a quick image review:
- All images have suitable alt text, though I question if the alt text for the leading image should mention that it is a 19th century house – would the reader know such from looking at the image?
- All images are appropriately licensed for either public domain or Creative Commons – indeed, each one is the work of the uploader.
- All images contribute encyclopedic value to the list.
- The small quibble about the alt text isn't a dealbreaker for me, so I'm going to support on images. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 22:00, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hey man im josh
[edit]Source review: Passed
- Reliable enough for the information being cited
- Consistent date formatting
- Consistent and proper reference formatting
- Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
- Spot checks on 15 sources match what they are being cited for
Feedback:
- Why do some of the refs use " Te Ao Mārama - Tauranga City Libraries" instead of simply "Tauranga City Libraries"? I see the copyright lists, but I think it may be more appropriate to just list the second option. Partly because I looked at Te Ao Mārama, and it seems more symbolic that they include that in the copyright? Please do correct me if I'm wrong.
That's all I've got, good stuff as always! Hey man im josh (talk) 20:54, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Hey man im josh: Oops, good catch there with the libraries. Fixed. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:45, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- You missed one, but I got it. Support. Hey man im josh (talk) 15:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 3 December 2024 (UTC) [5].[reply]
- Nominator(s): EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The Pau Grand Prix is a motor race held on the Circuit de Pau-Ville street circuit in the commune of Pau in southwestern France. Famous names such as Lewis Hamilton, Alberto Ascari, Juan Manuel Fangio, Jim Clark, Jackie Stewart, René Arnoux and Tazio Nuvolari have won this race that has been held to the rules of various racing categories over the years. All comments are welcome EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]- "The ACBB was first inspired to hold race" => "The ACBB was first inspired to hold a (or possibly the) race"
- The key looks a bit odd with the bullet before each symbol, I would be tempted to remove the bullets (and replace with a colon for indentation)
- Done this as a table instead EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 18:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "Star design denotes multiple races were held" - I think simply "Denotes that multiple races were held" is fine. You don't say "dagger denotes..." and "double dagger denotes...." for the other two
- Think that's it! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:48, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Edits have been made to the article based on the issues raised above EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 18:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:28, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- MPGuy2824
- While sorting the table, the years when the race wasn't held sometimes comes on top. You'll have to ensure that it sorts at the bottom.
I couldn't find any other problems with table accessibility. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 09:18, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPGuy2824: I believe I have made the necessary amendments to the table that you raised EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 10:34, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Since one of the rows has two references, the column header for the last column can be changed to {{Ref.}}. I trust you'll fix this. Support promotion on table accessibility and prose. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 08:50, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]city street track in the centre of Pau, in the Pyrénées-Atlantiques department of southwestern France.
the sentence structure here is weird for me, but maybe that is because I am American and just used to "CITY, STATE". Maybe addinga commune
would achieve what you are trying to say in a little bit clearer way?The ACBB was first inspired to hold the race in 1933 after the success of the Monaco Grand Prix as well as other races in Nice and Nîmes
I believe you need a comma after "Prix"on a podium
seems superfluous and I would recommend deletingfor the longest wait between two victories
change "wait" to "period" or something similar, implies he was just waiting aroundSignature have the most wins of any team with seven
shouldn't it be "has". Its a team, right? So "The Signature Team has".
EnthusiastWorld37, nice work. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:44, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Gonzo fan2007: Have made edits to the list in response to the issues raised above EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 17:01, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:25, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 01:49, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 3 December 2024 (UTC) [6].[reply]
- Nominator(s): MikeVitale 00:43, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I have significantly expanded its content to meet the reasons why it was removed from its previous FL status. Its content now at least mirrors (if not improves upon, though that's subjective of course) List of Olympic women's ice hockey players for Canada, an existing FL. --MikeVitale 00:43, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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[edit]- "however, by 1997, the American team had improved" => "by 1997, however, the American team had improved"
- "and in their head-to-head match up" - pretty sure (unless this is an ENGVAR thing) that "match up" should have a hyphen
- "at the Olympic Winter Games in Pyeongchang, South Korea" - seems weird to link the whole of "the Olympic Winter Games in Pyeongchang" to the article on the games. I would link just the first three words to that article and link the city name to the article on the city (especially as I don't believe it is a well-known city on a global scale)
- I know they are mentioned in the lead but I think a key above the tables for abbreviations like "USHHOF" wouldn't hurt, especially as in that particular example you don't show the abbreviation in the lead
- External links should be below refs, not above them
- That's it from me! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:28, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your comments, ChrisTheDude. I believe that I have addressed all of them! --MikeVitale 01:00, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:27, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by Matthewrb
[edit]- Citation 18 has a CS1 error. More info
- Both the main tables need accessibility fixes - For more info, see MOS:DTAB
- Neither table has caption
- None of the rows have rowspans, and none of the columns have colspans.
- I was going to recommend adding a {{Commons category}} to the External Links section, but there is no ice hockey under commons:Category:Olympic sportspeople from the United States by sport - If you find an appropriate commons category I might recommend adding it.
That's all I've got. ~ Matthewrb Let's connect · Here to help 04:18, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your help, Matthewrb.
- I have already fixed the CS1 error. Then I started looking into the Commons Category thing. Sure enough, there's no CommonsCat for Ice Hockey players. Can you help me understand the difference between a Wikipedia Category and a Commons Category? Would creating a category on English WP automatically create a similar category on Commons? Are they two completely separate things that would need to be maintained separately? Is the Commons Category linked by Wikidata (which is something else I need to learn more about)?
- I'll look further into the a11y fixes later.
- --MikeVitale 12:15, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for fixing the CS1 error!
- Wikimedia Commons is a sister project, so creating a category on en.wiki would not transfer to Commons. The goal of having a Commons category would allow our readers to find images of all of the women's ice hockey players from the US, since Commons is a free media repository. I'm not familiar how commons categories link to Wikidata, as I only have really worked on article changes in WD. For more info, here are some links:
- Wikimedia Commons
- WP:COMMONS
- MOS:IWL
- WP:SIS (specifically the section "When to link")
- Wikimedia Commons is a sister project, so creating a category on en.wiki would not transfer to Commons. The goal of having a Commons category would allow our readers to find images of all of the women's ice hockey players from the US, since Commons is a free media repository. I'm not familiar how commons categories link to Wikidata, as I only have really worked on article changes in WD. For more info, here are some links:
- Please feel free to ping me when you're done with the DTAB fixes or if you have more questions about Interwiki links. ~ Matthewrb Let's connect · Here to help 19:39, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- MOS:DTAB fixes are now in place.
- I'll start looking into the Category / Commons Category thing. --MikeVitale 01:03, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Second reply:
- I found commons:Category:Olympic ice hockey players from the United States and added it as a sub-category of commons:Category:Olympic sportspeople from the United States by sport. I then added a {{commons category}} link to the External links section of the List. --MikeVitale 01:42, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Matthewrb I've added the {{commons category}}, and I've further added all members of the US Olympic teams through the years who already have their own category on commons to the category.
- Is there anything else that needs to be done? --MikeVitale 02:57, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @MikeVitale: Looks amazing! One final thing: your
scope="row"
on the tables aren't working properly. You need to replace the pipes (|
) with exclamation points (!
) right before the word "scope" - does that make sense? MOS:DTAB has example code if you need.~ Matthewrb Let's connect · Here to help 03:28, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]- @Matthewrb That's an easy fix -- that's already fixed. Thanks. --MikeVitale 03:37, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Well done! Support ~ Matthewrb Let's connect · Here to help 03:43, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Matthewrb That's an easy fix -- that's already fixed. Thanks. --MikeVitale 03:37, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @MikeVitale: Looks amazing! One final thing: your
- Please feel free to ping me when you're done with the DTAB fixes or if you have more questions about Interwiki links. ~ Matthewrb Let's connect · Here to help 19:39, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]The Canadians again won gold in Sochi at the 2014 Winter Olympics, in a 3–2 overtime win against the US team.
comma isn't needed.- Link "shootout" (Overtime (ice hockey)#Shootout). Also, I don't think shootout should have the hyphen.
National teams are coordinated by USA Hockey and players are chosen by the team's management staff.
recommend moving this to the first paragraph after the second sentence
That's all I got. Nice work MikeVitale. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:58, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your review and kind words.
- I have incorporated all of your suggestions into the article. --MikeVitale 01:13, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 03:53, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 01:52, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 3 December 2024 (UTC) [7].[reply]
- Nominator(s): IanTEB (talk) 13:52, 21 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've been working on Gen Hoshino articles for around a year. Though there are several more topics I've yet to cover, I thought it would be useful to expand upon this discography page for an outline, and have decided to nominate it for FL. Though I've contributed to a few GAs, this is my first experience with the featured content process. I'm sure there’s many issues that I am unaware of and any/all feedback would be appreciated.
I don't know if I'm making this nomination description too long, but a few of the Japanese sources used I believe are new to featured content nominations on enwiki, so I'd like to explain my usage rationales for a few. Active since 2013, Real Sound is (in my experience) an authority source on Japanese music. They have interviews with high-profile artists (including Hoshino) and have several writers I recognize from other sites, some of which also with articles on Japanese Wikipedia. Rockin'On Japan is the website of a print magazine running since 1972. Similar case to Real Sound. I’ve used the online CDJournal on almost all my GAs without issue. They have an editorial team that publishes reviews for CD singles and albums, spanning several years. I see them sort of as the Japanese AllMusic.
I'll try my best to fix any issues brought up. Any comments are appreciated! IanTEB (talk) 13:52, 21 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]- It took me a while to figure it out but when you say "For double A-side singles, the first two columns refers to the A-side tracks, and the third column refers to chart positions, sales, and certifications for the double A-side release", I think what you actually mean is "For double A-side singles, the first two rows refers to the A-side tracks, and the third row refers to chart positions, sales, and certifications for the double A-side release" -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:54, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, thank you; I've amended the article. Having such a note is from the start a little unusual, but it's the best solution I could come up with since there's instances of one double A-side having three different peaks on a singular chart. IanTEB (talk) 11:24, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "which decisively opened at first" => "which debuted at number one"
- "on the Billboard Japan Hot Albums and" => "on the Billboard Japan Hot Albums chart and"
- "Sixth place on Billboard Japan's year-end ranking for 2016" => "Placing sixth on Billboard Japan's year-end ranking for 2016"
- Why do you list the full track listings for the two indie releases but not for any of his official albums? I would suggest that the norm is not to show it for any album
- Do his most recent three albums not have Japanese titles?
- Never seen "streaming playlists" in a discography article but I guess in this day and age it's valid........?
- "though it would still peak at number 40 on the chart in December 2016" => "although it still peaked at number 40 on the chart in December 2016" (same for other similar sentences in the footnotes)
- That's all I got, I think...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:13, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: I've fixed the issues with the text and removed the track listing. I based the latter off of Meghan Trainor discography, which includes track listing for independent releases. My reasoning was that these will never have articles, so this would be the only place to include that information, but I've removed it anyways since I agree with your comment. Streaming playlists comes from Taylor Swift albums discography. I wasn't sure if I should include them but thought I might as well. I'd have no issues removing if anyone sees it as an issue. His three most recent albums are titled in English.
- Thank you for the comments. Please let me know if you find any other issues. IanTEB (talk) 17:46, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:02, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- MPGuy2824
- I checked the first two tables and the "Title" cell was missing its scope which should be "col".
- In the "As lead artist" table the cell "Peak chart positions" should have "scope=colgroup"
- Please check all the tables for these issues and fix them. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 08:05, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPGuy2824: Thanks for the comments. Since I'm not particularly knowledgable on Wikicode, I don't quite know what this has changed, but I've added the "col" scope to all title cells and the "colgroup" scope to all cells with a colspan parameter. Hopefully this addresses your issues. IanTEB (talk) 16:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Since I'm not particularly knowledgable on Wikicode, I don't quite know what this has changed
My fault, it is for accessibility reasons (for screen readers). I should have linked to PresN's standard comment here. While we are at it, I notice that some of the header cells of rows have scope as "col", when it should be "row" (e.g. "Stranger in Budokan" in Live albums). Do make sure that you check this in all tables. I've found no issues with the prose, so this is all that is remaining to get a support from me. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 01:55, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]- @MPGuy2824: I really appreciate the explanation; I'll definitely apply this whenever I work on tables in the future. I'm unable to find any use of the "col" scope for header cells (including Stranger in Budokan, which is preceded by
! scope="row" |
), unless I'm misunderstanding your comment. IanTEB (talk) 03:56, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]I'm unable to find any use of the "col" scope for header cells (including Stranger in Budokan)
I probably got confused by an earler use of that title, in a footnote of a column header. Support on prose and table accessibility. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 16:16, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPGuy2824: I really appreciate the explanation; I'll definitely apply this whenever I work on tables in the future. I'm unable to find any use of the "col" scope for header cells (including Stranger in Budokan, which is preceded by
- @MPGuy2824: Thanks for the comments. Since I'm not particularly knowledgable on Wikicode, I don't quite know what this has changed, but I've added the "col" scope to all title cells and the "colgroup" scope to all cells with a colspan parameter. Hopefully this addresses your issues. IanTEB (talk) 16:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No issues found; source review passed; promoting. --PresN 01:49, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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