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== Re:Wiki Cup == |
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Please go right ahead, as I noticed that you would be back. You will notice that your name is still set at the top of the list of the team. ~ Cheers! [[User:Dreamafter|<font color="crimson">Dreamy</font>]] [[User talk:Dreamafter|<font color="purple"><sup>§</sup></font>]] 23:06, 10 April 2008 (UTC) |
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Yes, please. ~ Cheers! [[User:Dreamafter|<font color="crimson">Dreamy</font>]] [[User talk:Dreamafter|<font color="purple"><sup>§</sup></font>]] 15:55, 11 April 2008 (UTC) |
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== Welcome back! == |
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Welcome back, Finns! I'm glad to see yuo are back on wikipedia. :) {{unsigned|Iamsocool!}} |
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== RE: [[2005 UEFA Champions League Final]] == |
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Erm, ok, I'll comment here. I don't review GANs very often (as I'm not particularly good at it) but I'll give it a shot. Although I've noticed you haven't listed it for GA, so is this a peer review? '''[[User:WBOSITG|<font color="darkblue">weburiedoursecrets</font>]][[User talk:WBOSITG|<font color="navy">inthegarden</font>]]''' 19:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC) |
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:OK, sure, I'll also give some points (quite a lot actually) that may/will be picked up on. Oh, and welcome back to Wikipedia ^^; '''[[User:WBOSITG|<font color="darkblue">weburiedoursecrets</font>]][[User talk:WBOSITG|<font color="navy">inthegarden</font>]]''' 20:14, 12 April 2008 (UTC) |
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== 2005 UEFA Champions League Final - some points to fix == |
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Well, here goes... |
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=== Lead === |
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* Wikilink [[BBC]]. |
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* You needn't have LIV next to the man of the match - see the 2007 article. |
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* ''Liverpool won the match in a penalty shootout after being 3–0 down at half time to level the score at 3–3 within the first 15 minutes of the second half.'' Perhaps split this, or add commas? |
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=== AC Milan's Route === |
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* Link the countries - [[Spain]] and [[Ukraine]], etc |
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* Watch for overlinking - [[Andriy Shevchenko]] is linked many, many times. |
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* Perhaps a picture here? Try [[Flickr]]. |
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* Watch for clichés - ''by virtue of''. |
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* Perhaps shorten the name to "Shevchenko". |
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* Perhaps wikilink [[handball (football)|handball]]. |
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* ''the semi finals pie'': Pardon? |
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=== Liverpool's Route === |
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* As with above, link the countries. |
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* ''In their first group game against AS Monaco Djibril Cissé gave them the lead in the 22nd minute, before, Milan Baroš doubled the advantage in the 84th minute.'' The commas are all over the shop here. |
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* ''back on track'' - bit of a cliché. |
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* Once again, watch overlinking, particularly Milan Baroš. |
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* ''A great defensive performance'' - POV. |
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* ''William Gallas's'' - <s>extra s there.</s> Check if this is consistent, i.e. use ''s's'' OR ''s''' all the way through. |
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* This section is a lot shorter than the AC Milan one; could (I stress) be seen as POV. |
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=== The Match === |
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* Perhaps add a "problems" section - not necessary but the 2007 article has one. |
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* ''a clumsy foul'': cliché |
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* Perhaps wikilink [[Offside (football)|offside]]. |
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* A very short first half section - the half that AC Milan dominated - POV perhaps? |
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* ''in both cases the goalscorers had benefited from an unawarded free kick'' - unclear what is being said here. |
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* ''nothing to separate the teams'' - cliché |
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* Some more sources, maybe? The whole match part relies on [33] and [34]. |
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* ''blasted the ball horribly'' and ''cool chipped finish'': POV |
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* ''Vladimir Šmicer also scored for Liverpool, with his last kick in a Liverpool shirt.'' What happened to him? Did he move, or collapse dead? Unclear. |
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* The trophy section would be better merged into the match summary - perhaps as "Post-match"? |
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=== References === |
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* Wow, UEFA everywhere! Perhaps some other sources? BBC? Liverpool Echo? |
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Apart from that (and it is a lot) it's good to go. The reviewer might give some more points for you though. And it really does need more pictures. '''[[User:WBOSITG|<font color="darkblue">weburiedoursecrets</font>]][[User talk:WBOSITG|<font color="navy">inthegarden</font>]]''' 21:12, 12 April 2008 (UTC) |
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:Oh, very well. I can't find it in [[WP:MOS]] so I'll let that slide. '''[[User:WBOSITG|<font color="darkblue">weburiedoursecrets</font>]][[User talk:WBOSITG|<font color="navy">inthegarden</font>]]''' 21:23, 12 April 2008 (UTC) |
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== GA review == |
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Hey Finns, sorry but I'm taking a break from GA reviews for a while - University Exam time at the moment, I'll get back to ya in May when my exams will be over! --[[User:Skully Collins|Phill]] <sup>[[User talk:Skully Collins|talk]] [[Special:Contributions/Skully_Collins|Edits]]</sup> <sub>[[User:Skully Collins/GA reviews|Review this GA review!]]</sub> 12:05, 15 April 2008 (UTC) |
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