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Your submission at Articles for creation: Neil Azous (April 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Oo7565 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Oo7565 (talk) 23:58, 19 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Oo7565 (talk) 23:58, 19 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neil Azous (April 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

There are two problems here:

The first is notability. Almost all the references are to his own works, not works about him. These do not prove notability, for which you need references providing substantial coverage from third-party independent reliable sources, not press releases or mere announcements . The industry award by itself is not enough.; there needs to be more.

The second is promotionalism. This article is essentially a press release, using language which would only be suitable in a press release. "thought leader" is a vague term, that usually indicate puffery--the meaning intended is , I think, that he succeeds in getting his articles published. " across various institutional investment strategy practice areas," is a vague phrase that adds nothing to the article--it is better to simply say te areas, but even thta needs to be references from a third party source. The article refers to him throughout by his first name. Only press releases do that (except for people notable in the entertainment or popular culture fields). "Because the model portfolio includes granular detail as to real time reporting of all theoretical investment positions, all costs associated with entering, carrying and exiting the trading strategies, Azous addresses his driving philosophy, which is committed to being free of all conflict when offering investment guidance and focused on counseling other industry professional investors as well as students of macroeconomic investment principles" is straight advertising and has no place in a WP article.

Please do not resubmit the article in this form. Unless you can find suitable references and remove the promotionalism, it will not be accepted.

You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Neil Azous and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also get real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DGG ( talk ) 16:44, 21 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 16:44, 21 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Neil Azous concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Neil Azous, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:05, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Neil Azous

Hello, Abel.sarah3. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Neil Azous".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 17:23, 11 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]