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User:Reham321/Seattle metropolitan area/SterlingAC Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Reham321

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Reham321/Seattle_metropolitan_area?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Seattle metropolitan area

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Lead

  • I think the current lead is a great summary that encompasses the major key points of the article including the growth in population and the major cities that make up the area. I don't think any changes need to be made here.

Content

  • Great job updating the census data with the latest information that is available.
  • Curious if there is any updated information from the Pew Research Center on the U.S. Religious Landscape - I would look into that if you haven't already and update that information as well.
  • Under 'Major Airports,' I would consider adding a paragraph about Harvey Airfield since domestic flights are now coming in and from the airport. I don't think that's the case for the other airports listed so I think it would be great to point that out.
  • All of the information presented is neutral which is great.

Sources and References

  • All of the references listed are reliable sources.