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[edit]St Kilda FC (2/18)
[edit]- Expansion of Home Grounds Section. Focus on History of the Grounds and their relevance to the club. Done
- Create a "Supporters" section Done
- Source information about demographics of the Saint's supporter base Done
- Number One Ticket Holders? Done
- Move Membership/Attendence there and condense the table. Done
- Add Sponsorships to Corporate section. Done
- History Cleanup Done
- Condense the section on 2000 - 2011. 2009 and 2010 are areas of focus. Done
- Synthesise the dot point format (In XXXX, Y happened.) into proper paragraphs. Done
- Remove Recentism Template Done
- Add Media to the History section of the page Not done
- Fix the Hall of Fame stuff. The current dot point table split is silly. Done
- Add a Partnership section, include information about the China partnership in conjuction with Port Adelaide. Done
- Referencing (Pagewide) Done
- Spelling and Grammar checks Done
- Nominate for Good Article Status Done
Sydney Swans (3/18)
[edit]- Lead Changes
- Split Premierships and Foundation VFL member Done
- Move the reserves mention to below the Foundation VFL member in the same paragraph. Done
- Add information such as colours behind the grounds at the bottom.style="background: #FFD; color:black; vertical-align: middle; text-align: center; " class="partial table-partial"|Pending
- Remove Recency section for after 2000 etc, as it's not relevant to the club as a whole like a lead should be. SHould be left with four paragraphs - Intro, Foundation VFL, Premiership and Other. Done
- Remove references if covered elsewhere per Leadcite Done
- History Changes
- Merge the two history sections! Done
- Furthermore, change the time blocks to better points of significance.
- Pre-Sydney history.
- Add more to pre-history sections. In particular - the entry to the VFL (which is a single sentence!). All five need doing, but this is the worst.
- Could be worth carving out a new section for the 70s individually. Swans made the finals in 1970 for the first time in ages, and were saddled with huge debts. Worth noting seperate.
- Merge Origins and VFA, VFL entry and first premierships. Make the split after WW1, say 1920 - then split again Post-WW2 for the unsuccessfuly period.
- Remove Media from the pre-history, possibly relocate to elsewhere in the article.
- Post-Sydney history
- Cut Back
- What is the most important, and what isn't?
- Player Information is 100% not important, especially the way it lists out numerous players.
- Extreme detail on unremarkable events, such as the John Longmire section having 3 paragrapahs on 2015 (where the Swans did not make the Grand Final)
- The most detail should be on 2012 and 2005, particularly the latter due to its role.
- What is the most important, and what isn't?
- Remove some media again
- Cut Back
- AFLW needs its own section
- Merge the two history sections! Done
- Club Identity
- Remove the Sponsors from the text. They can have their own section.
- Guernsey Table
- Add Club Logo Section
- Port doesn't need a mention in the club song section. They used the same tune, but so do many low level teams. It's not relevant to the Swan, it's relevant to the song.
- Cover the history of the Swans' home grounds/training bases. We have the SCG, but no others like Lake Oval.
- Rivalries
- Update the Sydney Derby. Feel like it could do with a little more text to buff it out slightly.
- West Coast-Sydney is dead. Make note of this in the section.
- Photo Quality is very poor. Replacement or Removal?
- Is Hawthorn-Sydney still alive? Also, remove recency. Hawthorn and Sydney were uncompetitive for many of the same years (50s, 60s), is there anything relevant there?
- Players
- Combine Reserves team into this section. Done
- Maybe cut back on the prose for the reserves team. Good that they've got their own section, no need to go overboard for their reserves though.
- Remove duplicate Corporate members??? Done
- Combine Reserves team into this section. Done
- Corporate
- Add the Sponsors here. Can add a table if needbe, but not a priority.
- Supporters
- Text looks fine, but it may need weeding. Won't rule out changing it to focus more on fanbase demographics ala St Kilda.
- Add Number One Ticket Holders
- Standardise the Membership-Attendance table.
- Partnerships
- Are there any? St Kilda and Sydney played in Wellington, could be a possible mention. Pride match, if it's a partnership?
- Honour Boards
- Change the Honour Board as per other articles
- Team of the Century + Hall of Fame + Military Service if applicable
- Achievements
- Club Done
- Remove the Nil sections. Completely uneeded, it's to show achievement and having Nil is pointless. Done
- Individiual
- Formatting is atrocious. Must fix. Done
- Remove the headings and replace with bold text. Done
- If required, add more medals
- All Australian
- Add it! The Port Page version should be relevant as South Melbourne players qualified.
- Club Done
- Media Done
- Remove Media Section. Largely irrelevant to the club Done
- See Also Done
- Remove irrelavant links, add relevant ones. Done
- Notes Done
- Add this section Done
- External Links
- Why does it link to that documentary? Check it out, use as a ref if needed, and remove.
- Whole Article
- Referencing
- Improve usage of encyclopedic language.
- Reorder sections - Players move up to below club identity as an example Done
- Spelling/Grammar
- NOMINATE FOR GA
Gold Coast Suns (4/18)
[edit]- Generalised Page Cleanup
- Combine 2009-2011 seasons as 'Foundation'
- Remove the templates regarding the inaugural teams, which are largely irrelevant.
- Combine Recruitment and the above new Foundation section
- Combine Stadium and Club Symbols
- Remove Coaching Staff section
- Combine the three honour boards under one universal section
- Group the three squads (AFL, Reserves and AFLW) under one 'Players' section'
- Move Club Records below Club Achievements
- Combine 2009-2011 seasons as 'Foundation'
- Expand Individual Awards.
- Do the Suns have a Hall of Fame? If so, combine it with the honour board section.
- Create a new supporter section
- Include information about the supporter coverage of the Suns across QLD
- Add the Suns TV information to this section
- Condense the size of the Carrara section. Make note of any deals they've had (i.e Cazaly)
- Add a Partnership section, include information about the China partnership in conjuction with Port Adelaide.
- Add 2020/21 info if pertinent
- Are other season results (like 2015) important? If not, remove them.
- Referencing
- Nominate for Good Article Status