User:Big universe/imagetest

[Hello, note to anyone looking @ this: am still trying to figure out what is and isn't allowed. Created this subpage using the instructions on the User Pages guideline page (and...it worked! yay!). Wanted to use it to store info on things I'm keeping an eye on/working on, and AFAIK that's okay. If not, please let me know--thanks in advance for your help!]

*TO DO and NOTES (for now)*

9/26/17

Green libertarianism   (https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Green_libertarianism)

Article is disorganized, confusing, doesn't make any compelling points.
Assertions made aren't adequately substantiated.
Interesting idea, but very weak page. And yes, it's a "thing" (i.e. "relevant"): CNN and Alternet articles (among others) have covered this. "Green libertarian" would seem at first to be a contradiction of terms (e.g. comment i replied to on the GL talk page), but there's a lot of common ground between these two ideologies--to which the pre-existing article does not do justice. In short: the topic is good, but its implementation is not.
Needs cleanup, unification, and organization of ideas. Essentially needs a total overhaul.
Do I have the time? Good question...

9/26/17

Free Democratic Party (Germany)   (https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Free_Democratic_Party_(Germany))

Ahlen program (Adenauer/CDU/post WW2):
* * Needs reference/citation.
* * Red link. Create new article (have collected several ref's so far).
Hilariously long run-on sentence/section. 2nd half of paragraph/sentence is unintelligible: looks like someone lifted it straight out of google translate without actually reading it. Needs to be cleaned up.
Only looked up the FDP because of a reference to it in an online news article. I DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS. (LOL)

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