Talk:Typhoon Choi-wan (2009)

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January 10, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Typhoon Choi-wan was the first Category 5 equivalent super typhoon on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale during 2009?

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Track map

Please update the track map. I'm no good with the track software. --IrfanFaiz 07:07, 22 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Its been updated its just that you are apparently not allowed to upload an image over another image at the minute Jason Rees (talk) 08:38, 22 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Typhoon Choi-wan (2009)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:45, 8 January 2010 (UTC) Overall this article is good, though I did find a few concerns:[reply]

The first paragraph is quite long; split it.
The first sentence of the lead should explain what it is, exactly. It just dives right into the information about the typhoon.
"Later that day the island of Agrihan was placed under a Tropical Storm Watch, before early the next day along with Tinian and Saipan, the tropical storm watches were upgraded to a Typhoon watch" I see what you're saying, but confusing as written. Reword.
Define "navtex area".
I gave the article a copyedit; read through again and make sure there's no other grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. Especially double check comma usage, as I found many problems with that.

I'll put the article on hold, and will pass it when this is fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:45, 8 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've gotten most of the issues with the article. I have yet to give the meteorological history a good read through due to lack of time. I should be able to polish it up later today. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:32, 8 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Since the other issues are done, and most of the article at least has been copyedited (caught a typo in the ce, lol), I am willing to pass the article now as it is, though you're certainly welcome to do a bit more copyediting on it if you find anything else. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:21, 10 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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