Talk:Tom Friendly/GA1

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This is a very interesting article. Here are my comments:

on the ABC television series Lost -> on the American Broadcasting Company (ABC) television series Lost
Tom sedate them and take them to ~~the~~ a pier
wikilink Fiji
Tom is shocked when John Locke (Terry O'Quinn) arrives, and reveals he is going with Ben to see Jacob, Ben's superior - Tom or Locke?
Ben radios Tom to be shoot them
When Tom was introduced he ~~wears~~ wore a fake beard and old clothes
Gainey was only informed - you need to explain who Gainey is here as it is the first time he is mentioned in the article (not counting the lead)

I'll give you a week to fix this. Good luck! :) TheLeft orium 20:44, 8 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, I think everything has been fixed now. Let me know if you come across any additional problems. Sanders11 (talk) 13:00, 9 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent work, I will pass the article now. —TheLeft orium 14:54, 9 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]