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Reviewer: MPJ-DK (talk · contribs) 14:50, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am about to start the review this article. I'll be making updates here over the next couple of days. MPJ-DK (talk) 14:50, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA Toolbox checks Green tickY
  • Link Check - The following links come up as dead according to the tool
  • Title: "Tacoma Link Expansion Environmental Evaluation: Historic and Archaeological... "
  • Added archived link.
  • Title: "Tacoma Link Expansion: Hilltop Extension"
  • Fixed.
  • Title: "Sound Transit: Tacoma Link" - Link changes when you click on it, suggest you update that to keep the link good for the future
  • Due to a recent website renovation, there is no longer a specific page for Tacoma Link. I removed the subpage from the infobox and went to the schedules for the External links section.
  • DAB - No issues Green tickY
  • Copyvio Tool - No issues detected Green tickY
Images (6) Green tickY

All images hits the mark in so far as:

  • Appropriate for the article (6B)
  • Have captions (6B)
  • Look like they all have appropriate licenses (6A)
  • Been on commons for years so highly unlikely that the licenses are misrepresented (6A)
  • (Not a GA criteria) - only the table images have "alt" text, ideally all should have it, more of a suggestion for improvement if you are looking for a future Featured Article push.
Stability (5) Green tickY
  • I see 1 revert in the article history, no indicators of edit wars in history or talk page
Neutral POV (4) Green tickY
  • Factual and direct, no issues
Coverage (3A) Major Aspects Green tickY
  • Looking at other GA articles of the same name nothing jumps out at me as missing.
Coverage (3B) Focused Green tickY
  • It sticks to the topic appropriately
Verifiable (2A) References Green tickY
  • Generally there are sources for everything as far as I can see
  • AGF on offline sources
  • Spot checked the linked sources and found everything covered
  • The station table is partially unsourced. There is a source above it to verify the station names and that they are part of the route. But nothing on the dates or the note listed.
Verifiable (2B) Reliable Sources Green tickY
  • All sources look like they are reliable and cited appropriately
Verifiable (2C) Original Research Green tickY
  • Nothing identified
Verifiable (2D) Copyvio Green tickY
  • No issues detected
Well written (1A) prose, spelling, and grammar
  • Lead: Tacoma Link runs for 10 to 14 hours per day, - Service section 17 hours per day on weekdays, from 5:00 am to 10:12 pm, 14 hours per day on Saturdays, 7:48 am to 10:12 pm, and 8 hours per day on Sundays and holidays - Which one is correct? and please make consistent.
    • Fixed.
  • Among the projects were a multimodal station - I suggest: "Among the revitalizations projects was the construction of a multimodal station"
    • Done.
  • Tacoma Dome Station opened for use by buses in October 1997 -> Tacoma Dome Station opened for bus operations in October 1997
    • Partially done. I don't want to repeat variations of "operations" twice in the sentence.
  • 1998 with the intent of building a link to downtown retail... - Suggestion 1998 with the intent to create transportation options for downtown retail...
    • Partially done, since this wasn't a project explicitly for retail/attractions, but rather a new mode.
  • A set of 20 potential route alignments were considered to connect Tacoma Dome Station... - A set of 20 potential route options were considered for connecting the Tacoma Dome Station...
    • Done.
  • , with trains using either Commerce Street - . The statement included options for trains using either Commerce Street...
    • Partially done. The statement is just the document that was used to publish the options.
  • changes in platform - What changes? Was it originally suggested to be a different form of transportation?
    • Clarified and split into a separate sentence.
  • Construction of the light rail line near the Tacoma Dome began in August 2000, resulting in a reduction in parking and complaints from business owners. - Construction of the light rail line near the Tacoma Dome began in August 2000, resulting in a reduction in parking and drew complaints from business owners
    • Partially done, by swapping "and" for "that".
  • shortly after the opening of Tacoma Dome Station to Sounder commuter rail service - suggestion shortly after the Tacoma Dome Station was opened up for Sounder commuter rail service
    • Partially done, in a different order.
  • via a public plaza that began construction in June 2001 - "that began construction" makes it seem like it was the plaza that started the work when I read it.
    • "that" switched to "which"
  • Sound Transit agreed to handle operations of the light rail trains, in lieu of contracting Pierce Transit or the city government, on an interim basis for an indefinite period of time. - Sound Transit agreed to handle operations of the light rail trains on an indefinite interim period interim basis, in lieu of contracting Pierce Transit or the city government
    • Partially done, since "indefinite interim" sounds awkward.
  • buses and businesses who requested the use of a mitigation fund - What is a mitigation fund?
    • Funds meant to make up for lost revenue due to construction impacts. Put a shortened version into the prose.
  • bus transfer station in February 2003 as light rail construction neared completion - bus transfer station in February 2003 when light rail construction neared completion
    • Not done. "As" is better suited here, as construction was still ongoing.
  • which was also marked by a ribbon-cutting event - which was also marked by a ribbon-cutting event
    • Done.
  • 2,000 patrons during its opening month, exceeding original projections; - if the original projection is known I think this is a good place to mention it.
    • The 2,000 figure is the projection, but for the year 2010. Added a mention.
  • share its lanes with mixed traffic - This is the only mention of mixed traffic in the route description, is that the only place it is mixed and when does it go back to a seperate lane?
    • It only runs in truly mixed traffic on Commerce Street. The rest is an exclusive trackway down the median of Pacific Avenue or 25th Street.
  • due to the cost of collection exceeding projected revenues - Any sources mention what the collection costs were? or the projected revenues?
    • The source doesn't mention the actual numbers at the time.
  • The Tacoma Link cars are stored and maintained outside of service hours at an operating base... - Outside of service hours, the Tacoma Link cars are stored and maintained at an operating base...
    • Removed "outside of service hours", since technically one car remains at the base during service hours as a spare.
  • cost $217 million, primarily using local funding and federal grants... - cost $217 million, primarily paid for by local funding and federal grants.
    • Fixed.
  • and scheduled to be completed - and is scheduled to be completed
    • Fixed.
Well written (1B) MoS for lead, layout, word choice etc. Green tickY
  • Generally looks okay for MOS Lead, word choices etc. but I do have a Layout issue
  • I have very little experience of what the standards are for rail articles so I looked at a couple of different GAs of a similar nature to get an idea of the standards. The "Station" section in this article differs very much in content and layout compared to similar articles such as MAX Red Line#Stations and Blue Line (Washington Metro)#Stations. I think it'd be great if the "Stations" section could match that better, at the very least provide more info than just pictures and names.
    • As this is a very short streetcar line, rather than a standard metro railway, there won't be a lot of detail that we can easily add to the stations table. Only one city (and two neighborhooods—downtown and not), one parking lot, and a few destinations that are already described in the station articles. SounderBruce 01:35, 20 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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