Talk:Galulatherium/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 13:57, 23 August 2010 (UTC)

Hi Ucucha, I've signed up to review this article on a bone fragment. Comments in a day or two. Sasata (talk) 13:57, 23 August 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Ucucha 16:20, 23 August 2010 (UTC)

Looks good-only a few minor suggestions:

• suggest adding dates for the geological eras on first usage (at least in the lead)
  • Added in the lead.
• "In 2007, Stevens and colleagues" perhaps give his full name, to be consistent with "David Krause" earlier
  • Nancy.
• "It preserves much of the body," I'm not sure what this means
  • Clarified, I hope.
• "…all of which are known from the Cenozoic, less than 65 million years ago, only." It's somewhat awkward to have that "only" stuck at the end of the sentence as a clause by itself.
  • Moved "only" up a few words.

Everything in order, promoting now. Sasata (talk) 16:46, 23 August 2010 (UTC)