Talk:T28 super-heavy tank/GA1

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Hi! I'll get the review up as soon as I can. Cheers! —the_ed 17— 19:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

What makes references 2-4 reliable?
- Try looking for these tanks on Google Books under limited and full preview only...that would help you.
  - Ref 2:The references are listed on the bottom of the article.
  - Ref 3:~~Getting the references.~~ There is a reference at the bottom of the article.
  - Ref 4:Also, getting the references.
  - Google Books: When I searched there, yes previously to your mentioning it, when it was mentioned, it was only in a book about metallurgy and metallurgical engineering, no preview. When searching for just "T28" it give books about the Soviet T-28.
    - Hmm well, look at this search...I know that you can't read them online, but can you get them at your local library? —Ed 17 for President _{Vote for Ed} 04:56, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"The T28 was designed as a counter to the German heavy tanks, such as the Maus and the E-100. Other countries had heavy tanks to break the Siegfried Line, such as the British Model A39 Tortoise, the French Char 2C, and the Soviet SMK tank, but the US wasn't to be left behind."
- References? "US wasn't to be left behind" is un-encyclopedic.
  - Removed part that is unencyclopedic, will be referencing.
The entire article needs a good copy-edit...a few grammatical errors make it harder to read.
- Will get one, I know a guy.
It also needs a little expansion...it seems "bare-bones"...again, try Google Books, that should help you expand it.
- See previous comment about google books, will try to do more.

My apologies, but I'm going to have to fail this...if you have any question, just leave a message on my talk page. As soon as you have fixed these issues, feel free to nominate it once more. —the_ed 17— 19:52, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]