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GA Review

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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 13:38, 9 January 2014 (UTC) I'll begin this review today or tomorrow. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:38, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

General points

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  • All images look good, either free or fair use.
  • Length and scope are good.
  • No obvious NPOV or edit warring.

Writing

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  • "But all four writers left the series at the end of the season." I would either remove the "but" or combine it with another sentence. The first option makes the most sense to me.

Casting

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  • I made some minor copyedits. Feel free to revert if any of them changed the meaning of the sentences.
  • "Her departure has subsequently been blamed on Maurice Hurley" Who blamed Hurley?
  • "There had been a letter writing campaign by fans..." might be better as "Fans started a letter-writing campaign..."
  • "Todd also appeared as the older Jake Sisko in the Deep Space Nine episode 'The Visitor'." I'm not sure this line is relevant to the article.
  • "Katsulas became better known for a main role in another American science fiction television series, Babylon 5, as G'Kar." Again, this may be beyond the scope of the article.

Ratings

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  • "By the end of season two, The Next Generation had risen to become the third most viewed series in its timeslots." Timeslots? Is that intentional or a typo?

Other than those minor points, it all looks fine to me. Nice article! --Coemgenus (talk) 18:44, 10 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]