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Reviewer: Till (talk · contribs) 10:22, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Hi! I will review this article :) Till 10:22, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- It was released as the first single from the album --> so lead single?
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- The lead and "background/composition" section state that it derives from the "teen pop" genre although the Infobox does not.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- critics --> music critics
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- It received mixed reviews from critics, who deemed it as infectious, yet unnecessary. --> Did some critics call it infectious and unnecessary? Or did some call it infectious, while others called it unnecessary?
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- An accompanying music video was directed by Jake Nava and features Lohan in several scenes dancing in club like surroundings and running from the paparazzi, emphasizing the song's theme. --> Something annoys me here. It seems hard to digest.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Background and composition
[edit]- New York, New York -> Distinguish from city and state please
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- The lead states that the song was released on 21 September 2004 although this is nowhere in the article (besides infobox).
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]- The song received generally mixed reviews from contemporary critics. -> Start with the song's actual title, "Rumors", and again - music critics.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- Some quotes could do with some paraphrasing
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- I think it is worthy of mentioning that it was certified Gold by ARIA (in Australia).
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- It also charted in Sweden and Netherlands.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Promotion
[edit]- Commissioned is spelt wrong.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- There are some commas that need to be put in the music video section for a better flow.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Make a column for personnel.
- Why is this necessary? - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- Because it looks more appealing Till 03:15, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
Track listings
[edit]- Instead of [...], use (...)
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Weekly charts
[edit]- Need to be separated into 2004 and 2005 peaks.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Make it only two columns. Three forces it for those on smaller screens.
Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
- References are all fine
- Thank you! :) - Saulo Talk to Me 20:29, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
Overall
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Short article but good, giving time to fix the issues.
- Pass/Fail: