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Two of the jury's nine women were black and the rest of the jury were white men.

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This implies that the jury consisted of two black women and 10 persons who were white men. Of the 10 persons who were white men, seven were non-black women at the same time as being white men.

Here's the way it comes in from a source that tries harder:

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Two of the jury's nine women are black. The other three jurors are white men.

http://www.chron.com/sports/astros/article/Bellaire-officer-panicked-in-Tolan-shooting-1694978.php

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2604:2000:C682:B600:5BF:5F84:27A3:12FB (talk) 10:29, 20 June 2016 (UTC)Christopher L. Simpson[reply]