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Former good article nomineeRevenge of the Mummy (Universal Studios Hollywood) was a Sports and recreation good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 18, 2008Good article nomineeNot listed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Revenge of the Mummy (Hollywood)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

As per previous GA reviews, this one is going to fail basically because of the paucity of references. There's too much to do to put it on hold. But briefly other work includes

  • Numerals less than ten should be spelled out in full
  • Section headings shouldn't include "the" and should follow normal rules for capitals per WP:MOS.
  • I would also suggest a severe copy edit. For example, the word coaster is used six times in the lead.
  • Lead has three pars. Doesn't meet WP:LEAD. Peanut4 (talk) 23:59, 18 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]