Talk:Noelani Goodyear-Kaʻōpua

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You have a very strong lead section and your writing is thorough. I like that you mentioned all the different writings that Noelani Goodyear-Ka'ōpua has written and the journals Goodyear-Ka'ōpua has been referenced in. I like that you give a brief explanation on what the books she has published are about. It looks like you did a lot of great research. I'm thinking that in the Areas of Interest section maybe add a little more about what "Aloha 'āina" is or a link that explains what it is. Your sources look reliable and you have a clear structure throughout the article. Also if you can find a picture of Noelani Goodyear-Ka'ōpua that always adds!