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Reviewer: Khanassassin (talk · contribs) 18:34, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ayo, foo', I'm 'bout to take a look @ dis article so get ready 4 da review. --Khanassassin 18:34, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Plot

Production


Reception

  • Although I copy-paste from the the "Mortail Recoil", it's good. Have you considered merging the articles: you would keep the reception section pretty much the same, while making an overall beefier article, and the two episodes are tightly connected anyway. Only a suggestion though, it would make sense. --Khanassassin 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    It's true that the last paragraph is very similar; most reviewers saw the episodes as kind of one. However, the production section might be a little hard to redesign, since each episode was storyboarded by a different team of writers, and so they each talked about their respective episodes in the commentary. If I can't find any more episode-specific reception articles, I may very well have to merge.

References There's one citication eror (ref. #13), but it's cool. Not a part of this section, but an external section would be cool; not mandatory, though. --Khanassassin 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fix all of these up, and you shall pass. --Khanassassin 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]