Talk:Mad Men season 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lede: The lead needs to summarize every section in the article! Very small. Sorry if too harsh.
Lede: premiered → commencing airing
Lede: Add comma after "concluded" on first sentence.
Overall: Please add more images in the "Production" section, or other sections, if you can
Cast: Need references for recurring cast episode counts
Plot: Removed this section, and add a "Plot" information all into the "Episodes" section, for each separate article.
Production: This section needs huge expanding. Please add "Filming" or other types that could fit into it.
Production: The "crew" section, and the whole section is unreferenced. Please add.
Reception: 88/100 → 88 out of 100
Reception: Link Metacritic
References: Link all articles if possible
References: Ref. 1 - Make TV by the Numbers not italic, as publisher rather than work parameter
References: Ref. 3 - Make CNNMoney.com to CNN

I will put article "on hold" for now. TBran dl ey 01:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: Can you incorporate the top 10 lists.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:48, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I'll have to fail as no progress has been made over the last month. Sorry! TBran dl ey 06:22, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]