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We should not delete this article because the main page Kiniro no Corda if overflowing with this episode guide. There is no seperate article so I created this new page. In time the current format should be changed into the standard one as exaples in Bleach or Naruto.--Hanaichi 04:59, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

If you'll restore the episode guide to the main article, I'll help you to trim it. As an example, here's a suitable out-of-universe description of episode one:
Episode one introduces the main characters, Lili and Hino, and the Seisou Academy setting. Lili is a fairy involved with the school's music contest, the Intramural Concours, and Hino is a student who is chosen to enter the competition by Lili, despite not being a music student, because she is able to see Lili. Lili presents Hino with a magic violin which can be played by any true lover of music.
Also introduced is Fuyuumi, a first year student who is bullied by other music students because she was entered into the Concours. When Hino defends Fuyuumi, the music students challenge Hino to play, and she agrees to play before the Concours in one week's time.
In my opinion this is clearer because it avoids unnecessary detail (for instance, I note that Amou is not really involved in the main action, so I have not mentioned her part). It's also less than half the size of your version. Some episode summaries can be much shorter, for instance here is an example for episode two:
Episode two introduces Tsukimori, a highly talented but very conceited second year music student who is disdainful towards Hino. Despite this, when she hears Tsukimori play she is greatly moved and give him great praise, which he haughtily dismisses. After hearing him play, Hino is able to recall the feelings and with the magic violin she is able to play the piece, which Lili tells her is Schubert's Ave Maria. Hino tells Lili that since the magic violin enables her to produce such beautiful sounds without effort, she feels that it would be unfair to others to enter the Concours.
That's somewhat less than one-third of the size of the existing summary because the second episode contains less introduction and exposition. It obviously isn't perfect because, amongst other things, the role of Tsuchiro Ryouta in the second episode isn't made clear enough for me to understand it, and I haven't myself seen this anime. --Tony Sidaway 12:52, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I see thats more resonable, but do you think 12+ episodes with short summaries like that will be okay on the main page?--Hanaichi 01:23, 31 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Ps. Maybe we should use a testing page first, trim the episode summary and then put it onto the main page.--Hanaichi 01:50, 31 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I see trimming the individual episode descriptions as a first step. Once this is achieved it will be possible to reduce it further by isolating the main plot arcs and describing them with reference to key episodes. In this way it can be trimmed to 1000-1500 words maximum, very readable and encyclopedic, with all relevant information available and no clutter.
We can perform the reduction either here or on the main page. I'll remove the "prod" tag so we have the option of continuing here and then merging if and when appropriate. --Tony Sidaway 02:04, 31 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Layout

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Seeing this is just a new page, I plan to make it into the standard layout for episode guide. If anyone can help me it will be greatly appretiated.--Hanaichi 04:33, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Chopin's Allegro

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What is this piece referred to? Is it the Allegro de Concert, Op. 46? -- JackofOz (talk) 01:11, 25 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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