Talk:Kaiser-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:59, 14 August 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
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B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
Add armor to infobox. Details of armament as rebuilt.
I'd prefer to keep the figures for the ships as built; the two ships were rearmed differently and I don't want to make the infobox too long. Armor added. Parsecboy (talk) 20:46, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, then how about some general info in the main body as to what their main guns became?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:13, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The 21cm guns were removed, and the info on the new battery is already in the armament section. Parsecboy (talk) 10:50, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

B. Focused:
Explain L/20, link boiler, battery, torpedo tube, torpedo. Wooden or iron decks?
Should all be added, except the last one. Groner doesn't say, but I'd assume teak decks. Parsecboy (talk) 20:46, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
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Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
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