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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 13:31, 4 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 13:31, 4 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • I believe we should add "(died in 1196)" after "Asen I or John Asen I (Bulgarian: Иван Асен I)"
  • After the emperor had refused them The Emperor.
  • fled over the Danube, but they returned in the autumn Link Danube.
  • over the lands along the Struma river in the early The Struma River.
  • them to return to the Byzantine Empire in the autumn.[34][31][35] Re-order the refs in numerical order.
  • thus adopting the name of a 10th-century tzar (or emperor) of Bulgaria Link tzar.
  • Which English do you use? Because I can see some American v. British usages.
  • First Bulgarian Empire is overlinked.
  • Link Constantinople.
  • occupy new territories of the Byzantine Empires You mean Byzantine Empire?
  • I see eight howevers, maybe we should limit the word to max two howevers?
  • Cumans is overlinked.
  • The emperor dispatched Alexios Gidos and Basil Vatatzes The Emperor?
  • the Byzantine fortresses along the river Struma leaving The River Struma?
  • for a huge ransom from the emperor The Emperor?
  • tsar v. tzar maybe standardise one of the tsars?
  • Isaac Komnenos persuaded Ivanko to kill the tsar The Tsar?
  • with a sword hidden under his garments.[71][67] Re-order the refs in numerical order.
  • became the emperor of Bulgaria in 1218 The Emperor?
  • I think American because it was written in American first so remove the hyphens and replace the space in the words counter-offensive, counter-attacks and merge counter-invasion. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:19, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Images

  • Looks good to me.

Sources

I'll do this tomorrow.

  • O City of Byzantium, Annals of Niketas Choniatēs's source needs a Google Books' URL.
  • Some ISBNs have hyphens while others don't maybe standardise them.
  • The Crusade of Frederick Barbarossa needs a Google Books' URL.
  • Chary's book needs a Google Books' URL.
  • Curta's ISBN goes to another book. Wrong ISBN?
  • Fine's book needs a Google Books' URL.
  • Standardise Brill and BRILL.
  • Petkov's book needs a Google Books' URL.
  • Same as above.
  • The rest looks good.

Infobox

  • Looks good to me.