Talk:Freedom of Expression (book)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Johnfos (talk) 19:28, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This article is close to meeting the GA criteria, but a couple of improvements relating to the issue of readability are needed:

I would suggest that the Awards section be removed, as this small section interrupts the flow of the article and is already covered in the Reception section immediately below.
Please review the direct quotations which are being used, as there are many of them and it may be better to paraphrase some, and trim the very long quotes where possible.

I am putting the article "on hold" until these issues are resolved. Johnfos (talk) 20:34, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much for the helpful suggestions. I have removed the entire Awards sect. I have trimmed down significantly the quotations in the Reception sect. Hopefully this is now satisfactory? Cheers, -- Cirt (talk) 20:42, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Passed. Johnfos (talk) 23:40, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]