Talk:Flickorna på TV2/GA1
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Nominator: VirreFriberg (talk · contribs) 02:17, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 01:00, 24 January 2025 (UTC)
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A rare case where the title alone gets me to review! An enjoyable article with a few items that aren't idiomatic in English or need correction. Other than that, very good. Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:09, 24 January 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @Sammi Brie! I've corrected and revised all of your suggestions to the article! Thank you for such a quick review! VirreFriberg (talk) 14:14, 24 January 2025 (UTC)
Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.
Copy changes
[edit]- I did a round of copyedits. Please check to see they are to your liking.
- The translation of Sveriges Radio/Sveriges Television as "Sweden's" and not "Swedish" strikes me as a little odd, but apparently that's how we have it on their own articles.
- I am unsure if the quote of the controversial but apparently untranslatable line needs to be in a quote box.
- alongside a coup where Gyllene Tider and their friends and relatives sent in 300 postcards to radio show Poporama requesting a re-play of the single I do not know if coup is the right word here.
- I'd change the descriptions of reviews to past tense in the Critical reception section. e.g. In Aftonbladet, it is described as a to In Aftonbladet, it was described as a
- Sweden's most commercially successful pop bands either should be Sweden's most commercially successful pop band or one of Sweden's most commercially successful pop bands
Sourcing and spot checks
[edit]This article can't handle a typical spotcheck because it is very heavy on offline sourcing and some sources that are in trial digital subscriptions. [4] (HN) came back clean. [9] (Femina) came back clean.
Images
[edit]No issues with the images in this article. Encouragement (not necessary for GA): Add alt text.