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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Evgeni Berzin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:40, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
Going to be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 19:40, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for picking this up! I have made two small changes, but I think, it should be good now. The infobox might be a little confusing now. But as I state in the article body, he had his contract terminated in 2000, but only officially retired in 2001, that's why the two dates don't quite match. Zwerg Nase (talk) 09:12, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
- Good for pointing that out! MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
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- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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Early years
[edit]- Wikilink 1990 Amateur World Championships to 1990 UCI Track Cycling World Championships and 1991 Amateur World Championships to 1991 UCI Track Cycling World Championships
- Done, also added a source and added medals to the infobox
- "Here, he teamed up with Emanuele Bombini," - There
- Done
- "but Kuznetsov refused." - any reasons as to why Kuznetsov refused?
- Done
1993: The first season
[edit]- Wikilink 1993 to 1993 Tour of Britain
- Done
1994: Rise to stardom
[edit]- "Comments by Dr. Ferrari to the press afterwards," - please avoid using Dr. per MOS:DOC
- Done
- "the tensions within the team mounted" - increased
- Done
- "Berzin still demanded higher pay" - the word in bold doesn't look like its needed since they is no mention of any other mention of him demanding higher wages in the article
- Actually, there is, at the end of the preceding paragraph.
- I need glasses lol. ;) MWright96 (talk) 20:17, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
- Actually, there is, at the end of the preceding paragraph.
- "Nevertheless, he was now viewed as the new big name in international cycling." - viewed by whom?
- It was in the source, but I removed it, it's a little iffy.
- "finishing a disappointing 21st" - the word in bold is unneutral
- Done
1995–1996: Ups and Downs
[edit]- "thereby securing his second place." - the word in bold is unneeeded
- Done
- "He eventually retired from the race on stage 10." - Why ws
- Quoted the source as best I could.
- "which included a split from his wife Stella." - he and his wife Stella separating.
- Done
- "He would however lose significant time the next day," - any reasons why?
- I guess he just had what cycling jargon calls a jour sans, but I cannot find a source for that.
- Val d'Isere is missing the hyphen between "Val" and "d'"
- Done, well spotted!
- "on his way to eventual overall victory." - en route
- Done
Later career
[edit]- "Berzin rode well to place second to" - the text in bold is not neutral
- Done
- Wikilink handlebars to Bicycle handlebar
- Done
- "Berzin joined Française des Jeux for 1998" - joined the Française des Jeux team for 1998
- Done
Career achievements & Grand Tour general classification results timeline tables
[edit]- The spaces between the "Source:" and the refs is not needed
- Done
References
[edit]- The author of Reference 3 should be better off written as Nicholl, Robin for consistency
- Done, also fixed date format
- Reference 42 is missing the author
- Done, completely overlooked that the author was given below the article
- Reference 43 is missing the language it was written
- Done, also fixed date format
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the swift review! I think I've addressed all points. Zwerg Nase (talk) 18:22, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 20:17, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 11:35, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
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