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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 7 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Should be up tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 17:21, 7 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Excellent, look forward to working with you on this.  MPJ-DK *
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Lead
  • "Professional wrestling promotion" - The first P doesn't need to be capitalised
  • "In early 2012 was given a new image and ring name," - missing "he"
Professional wrestling career
  • "Lucha libre has a long held tradition of not revealing the birth name of masked wrestlers unless they are later unmasked" - this sentence is missing a full stop
Metro (2009-2012)
  • Delink Mexico City since it is already link in the previous sub-section
  • "slowly advancing up the ranks to some times working in the semi-main event on a few shows." - some times is one word
  • "The "Metro" ring character was introduced in 2006 and had previously been given given to young wrestlers who had yet to establish their own ring character." - repititon of the word given
  • "The first part of the tournament took place on December 22, 2009 and the second part of the tournament took place on December 29." - same for took place
  • "He was the first wrestler eliminated in the seeding battle royal and then lost to Héctor Garza, then-reigning CMLL World Heavyweight Champion. in the first round." - remove the full stop after the word Champion
  • "On November 18, 2010, Máscara Dorada announced that he was relinquishing his part of the Mexican National Trios Championship due to holding three other championships at the same time.. " - remove duplicate full stop at the end of this sentence
  • "Diamante Azul was part of "Block B" that competed on the August 6, 2010 Super Viernes show." - You want to change Diamante Azul to Metro for consistency in the sub-section
Diamante Azul (2012-present)
  • Here you use a mixture of Diamante Azul and Azul - please rectify this
  • Same for On/in xxxx - only some sentences have a comma and others don't
  • Delink France per WP:OVERLINK
  • "Azul and Rush finished their tour with a pay-per-view on December 2," - pay-per-view event?
  • "the ring in May, 2016working for CMLL" - remove the comma and added space between 2016 and working
  • "reigning CMLL worl d Tag Team Champions" - remove the space in the word World
References
  • References 9, 33 & 38 are redirects to their respective home page and not to their intended links. Can archive links be found for those sources?

That's all the points I found. On hold until everything is actioned. MWright96 (talk) 12:05, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MPJ-DK: I made one fix in the article, other than that, it is good for GA quality. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 9 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]