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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Should be up tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 17:21, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- no dab links
- Lead
- "Professional wrestling promotion" - The first P doesn't need to be capitalised
- "In early 2012 was given a new image and ring name," - missing "he"
- Professional wrestling career
- "Lucha libre has a long held tradition of not revealing the birth name of masked wrestlers unless they are later unmasked" - this sentence is missing a full stop
- Metro (2009-2012)
- Delink Mexico City since it is already link in the previous sub-section
- "slowly advancing up the ranks to some times working in the semi-main event on a few shows." - some times is one word
- "The "Metro" ring character was introduced in 2006 and had previously been given given to young wrestlers who had yet to establish their own ring character." - repititon of the word given
- "The first part of the tournament took place on December 22, 2009 and the second part of the tournament took place on December 29." - same for took place
- "He was the first wrestler eliminated in the seeding battle royal and then lost to Héctor Garza, then-reigning CMLL World Heavyweight Champion. in the first round." - remove the full stop after the word Champion
- "On November 18, 2010, Máscara Dorada announced that he was relinquishing his part of the Mexican National Trios Championship due to holding three other championships at the same time.. " - remove duplicate full stop at the end of this sentence
- "Diamante Azul was part of "Block B" that competed on the August 6, 2010 Super Viernes show." - You want to change Diamante Azul to Metro for consistency in the sub-section
- Diamante Azul (2012-present)
- Here you use a mixture of Diamante Azul and Azul - please rectify this
- Same for On/in xxxx - only some sentences have a comma and others don't
- Delink France per WP:OVERLINK
- "Azul and Rush finished their tour with a pay-per-view on December 2," - pay-per-view event?
- "the ring in May, 2016working for CMLL" - remove the comma and added space between 2016 and working
- "reigning CMLL worl d Tag Team Champions" - remove the space in the word World
- References
- References 9, 33 & 38 are redirects to their respective home page and not to their intended links. Can archive links be found for those sources?
That's all the points I found. On hold until everything is actioned. MWright96 (talk) 12:05, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: - I believe I have addressed all of your concerns and comments. MPJ-DK 22:38, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MPJ-DK: I made one fix in the article, other than that, it is good for GA quality. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 9 August 2016 (UTC)