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A start

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I have started to make an improvement on this article. It still needs major work but now has a large section on who this guy is, and what he is connected to. I added the See Also and external links and Ref/note area etc. skip sievert (talk) 17:09, 3 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Corrections

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Hello, Thanks to those who have contributed to this article. As subject of this article, I kindly would like to request several corrections. As currently written, the article contains a number of factual errors, a clarification, and a misspelling:

Thanks in advance for timely corrections of the above. Sincerely, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 11:02, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  •  Partly done @DASonnenfeld: I have removed the birthplace as it is unsourced, I have fixed the typo in the third paragraph and I have changed the tense r.e. Wageningen University. The other three points already seem to be noted in the article, are you requesting a change in wording or similar or is there something I'm missing? —  crh 23  (Talk) 15:57, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for the speedy corrections, Crh23! The third bullet point, above, is a clarification (the R. D. Clark Honors College is not a standalone institution; my undergraduate degree is from the U of Oregon). Though perhaps subtle, the fourth and fifth bullet points are corrections to the existing text, as well. I can elaborate, if helpful. Kind regards, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 16:48, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@DASonnenfeld: A specific change request (i.e. XXX replaced by YYY) would be handy, thanks. —  crh 23  (Talk) 20:08, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Sure, Crh23. Here are my suggested corrections:
Thanks again, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 21:26, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
 Done: looks all right to me, I have made the requested changes —  crh 23  (Talk) 06:30, 28 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]