Talk:Black Friday (2004 film)/GA1

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Reviewer: Veera Narayana (talk · contribs) 17:00, 5 January 2019 (UTC)

Yes. I am reviewing this. Comments to follow. Veera Narayana 17:00, 5 January 2019 (UTC)

Nice work on this, mostly spotless, but need some clarity on the following:

• "Kashyap then suggested to director Aditya Bhattacharya that he make it into a film. When Kashyap told him he felt there was a film to be made about the event, Bhattacharya gave it to him to direct." -- Here, what i understood was that Kashyap offered Bhattacharya this script to direct, who instead suggested that Kashyap did it. If i was right, please tweak this line into something simpler and rather straight to the point.

Done

• What Newstrack was exactly?

Can you point me towards it?

• We have already introduced Aditya Bhattacharya as the supposed director of the TV series. Why go after his full name again and again?

Fixed

• Coming to the image, despite being an outsider, i can say that Mumbai has more than one major slum that is Dharavi, like say, Kamatipura? Which slum are you referring to in the image?

Dharavi is the biggest slum in Asia and several scenes of the film were shot here.

• When you wikilink anything in the references, be uniform. Either link everything in the first instance of many, or don't link any.

Done.

Veera Narayana I have hopefully resolved the above queries. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:26, 7 January 2019 (UTC)

Well done. Promoted. Veera Narayana 07:27, 8 January 2019 (UTC)