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Expansion

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This page dose need to be expanded. They were not around long sort of a one album wonder. But they were big for a couple dxnccbcis posted for deletion. Given time I think I could expand this article but it is about to get deleted so we'll see. BTW -- they were Dove Award Nominees.

I've added significant content and some refernces. In text citations need to be cleaned up. M-BMor 10:56, 28 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'm not sure what more can be added. They had a notable career but it was short. Maybe incorporating the other two points into the section will clean it up but beyond that I think contentwise this section is complete. I'm removing the expand section banner and moving it to personal life as this section could use expansion. Maybe names of spouse or other interesting info. 74.138.202.34 19:07, 5 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Pictures

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There are many pictures out there. I don't have the knowledge yet on how to add pics to an article. Is an album cover acceptab le fair use? If so I can get a j-peg together I just need to know how to add it in. M-BMor 03:57, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Expansion

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What else could be added to this article? I am not sure what else to add. It seems relatively straight forward. M-BMor 03:57, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Clean Up

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There are some good sources here. However it seems that citations need to be "wikified". Also some gentle re-writing might be in order to make it flow. I tagged the article with a clean up tag.

Assessment comment

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A lot of content has been added looks like there needs to be some flushing iout though including putting citations in text.

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