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GA Review

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Reviewer: CallMeNathanTalk2Me 18:31, 14 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Remixes? I think it would read better "a remix and video" because it has several videos too
  • The Allmusic review seems a bit out of place. Try wording or placing it differently

Composition and release

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  • Six singles -> you only list 5. Fix
  • on the Billboard 200 at number thirty-six -> at number 36 on the
  • lasting forty-three charting weeks -> re-word

Charts

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  • You should create a small numerical chart as usual. Three charts seems enough to make it.

References

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  • 8&9 are linked twice
  • As well 11
  • Most of the rest are all over-linked