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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:51, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this. MWright96 (talk) 08:51, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • "An imitation waterfall surrounded by imitation exotic vegetation stood in the back." - reptition of imitation  Done
  • US should be United States as seen in the infobox  Done

History

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  • "In 1942 Paul" - needs a comma  Done
  • "whose tab was always on the house." - sounds informal  Done

Architecture and fittings

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  • "and an imitation waterfall surrounded by imitation exotic vegetation stood in the back." - same point as in the lede

 Done

Acts

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  • "1940s through 1960s" - 1940s through to the 1960s  Done
  • "5AM show at the 500 Club-the last performance of the Rat Pack there." - The longer hyphen is needed  Done
  • Link Internal Revenue Service  Done

Nice work from you and the other major contributors. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 14:52, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your quick action We hope. Article can now be promoted to GA. :) MWright96 (talk) 16:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]