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GA Review

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Reviewer: Mujinga (talk · contribs) 23:55, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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I'll take this on to review as part of the Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/GAN Backlog Drives/October 2020 Mujinga (talk) 23:55, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Conflict of interest declaration: I'm a Notts Forest supporter from the 1990s and that doesn't bear much on this case.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Comments

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Lead

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Route

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  • "West Ham finished twelve points behind West Bromwich Albion (who were promoted in second place) and twenty behind league winners Norwich City" I'm not sure if this sentence is necessary since we don't have the equivalent for Palace
    No, Palace's position is mentioned in that very sentence, so it covers all the bases. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Their qualification for the play-offs was secured in injury time of the final game of the season when West Ham's Brian Deane equalised against Wigan Athletic" - Brian Deane not so necessary to mention by name, the important thing is it was West Ham, and the source says it was ironic so you could add that
    I don't see a problem with the name-check, and I'm not sure Wikipedia should be using terms like "ironic", we'll stick with the facts. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Both therefore missed out on the two automatic places for promotion to the Premier League and instead took part in the play-offs" - this isn't mentioned in the source
    It's in the source, the colour coding shows automatic promotion places and playoff places. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Ah yes took me a while but i see now Mujinga (talk) 17:23, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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Summary

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Details

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cool thanks for explanation Mujinga (talk) 17:23, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Post-match

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I have institutional access but I can't make it work, nevermind. I was able to find the "Shipperley strike sees Eagles soar to Premiership" article online and the quote is good, happy to AGF on the others.Mujinga (talk) 18:26, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
and a fine foto it is! Mujinga (talk) 17:24, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll put this on hold to give time for these quite minor comments to be addressed, not expecting any problems Mujinga (talk) 00:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mujinga I've addressed and/or responded to all your comments, cheers for the review. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 09:06, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the replies, I am satisfied this meets the good article criteria now. All the best, Mujinga (talk) 18:27, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]