Talk:Akin Busari

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Comments on article at 02:23, 9 April 2018 (UTC) from Gryllida (talk)

Hi Delords and Topemelbin

1) The references are provided via {{Cite web}} - good.

2) Some references are not provided inline (see references 1 to 18 in the last paragraph). Did you use them? If not please move them to an 'External links' section without ref tags. Otherwise please move them into the article text in the place where they were used. WP:Referencing for beginners may help you.

Correct example: She like trains [1] and lives in Ohio, US [2]. Her occupation was a professor of Arts in University Example in 200-2012 [3] and professor of Visual Arts in Institute of Examples in 2012-2018 [4].

Incorrect example: She like trains and lives in Ohio, US. Her occupation was a professor of Arts in University Example in 200-2012 and professor of Visual Arts in Institute of Examples in 2012-2018 [1][2][3][4].

3) First paragraph:

"Akin Busari (born August 20, 1986. in Lagos State, Nigeria), popularly known ( by whom? ) as Akin/Akin Music ( citation needed ), is a Nigerian Singer ( do not capitalise nouns ), songwriter and producer. He is the founder of Influential Music ( 1. what is that? provide context 2. when did he found it? 3. according to whom? 4. citation needed ) and popularly known ( by whom? according to whom? citation needed ) for his songs "Harmony", "Nigerian Girl", "Bamijo", "Omo Ele" and more recently ( when? ) "C'Mon" which has a touch of the popular 1984 hit "Gotta Get You Home Tonight" by "Eugene Wilde" ( according to whom? and citation needed )."

4) The infobox needs to float at the right.

5) I have not reviewed notability. I think it would be more useful to receive a response in regards to the status and usage of the 18 citations at the end before I begin a review of notability.

5) The 'Careers' paragraph has good inline citations. Thanks.

Please resolve the above and leave a message. Gryllida (talk) 02:23, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]